All Comments on 'It's Against the Law Ch. 01'

Generous and gave it average. They loved their spouses?!! Love means you break your marriage vows and keep on doing it?! Disrespect your spouses ok as you love them!! Total bullshit. jtwheels

Adultery should be illegal everywhere as voiced by others. Cheaters are thoughtless creatures having no clue or don't care how bad they hurt others with what they do. Good story

I will wait to give more feedback after I read the other chapters.

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Velly Velly nice mein fuhrer.... die Hündin ist verbranntes Brot (lhe bitch is TOAST!) German allusions are due to the icon...lol

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Honestly - a sludge hammer? You have to correct these horrible errors. I like your plots and story-telling, but this type of mistake ruins a story for me.

@AspernEssling

I am not a professional writer nor have I ever claimed to be. I am also not a professor of English Literature. I write because I enjoy it. I also use Word's Spell-check and Grammarly to check my work as well as go through it myself several times. Obviously, things still get missed. Since it bothers you so much, if you'd like to hire a professional editor for me, I'd be grateful, but I will not pay for one.

May I remind you that you did not pay to read my work. I offer it free of charge. If the occasional typo or mispelled word bothers you so much, I suggest you take a pass on my work in the future.

well now poor AspernEssling, Because the spelling is wrong of 'sledge hammer', he could not understand any part of the story. Poor fella, he's to be pitied. LP

Good story. AspernEssling needs to unpucker his asshole and learn to enjoy life

Sludge hammer? God, it was only a typo.

Appalling grammar and spelling piss me off / British English. (OK, time to loose you're cloths!) But typos are trivial.

I just checked online and adultery is not a crime anywhere in England. My stories, set here, have to reflect that. And how I wish we had that dramatic 'You've been seved!' Can't use that either.

MC is kind of wimpy, one of my bid crux with these stories is how these husbands go all out on the guy the wife cheats with, but not the slutwife. Even though she's the biggest part of the pain maker in the betrayal. Totally illogical...

I hate it when the men cry and cry and cry.

Wow this story is so vivid in the emotions experienced that they almost overwhelm me. I am hooked on this story now and eager to see how it unfolds. Thanks for sharing this amazing tale. John

I agree with ewray. There has been much feminizing of men in our modern womens lib feminist culture. Through literature, movies and Tv, newspapers and talk shows men have become convinced in order to be real men they must cry, they must show their feelings, they must talk about their problems. In other words they must become women.

She had near zero remorse.

God, I hope he doesn't RAC.

The truly guilty person her is his wife.

SHE COMTTED to cheating. Planned it at every step and missed opportunity to degrade and hurt him.

Her lover actually had a bit of a consciences.

These guys cry way to much. I think some tears are necessary but not to the point of total meltdown

Good job. Thanks for your writing.

Not a bad start, hoping it gets better. I did wonder about the phone call from Jack Northrupe, just wanting to meet for a beer or so. Kind of a lame excuse and I'm not sold it was coincidental that he called. Should have been some other way to get him involved, but okay, he's in. The remark about keeping Jackson a cell with Bubba made me laugh.

Good start. I'm giving it a 5 since other chapters will hopefully cover the aftermath well.

So funny how all these writers create cheating characters that also love their husbands, you just don't get that so much in real life ... that's more of a male thing.

It's a good start. Hope the future tells about the fate of the two cheaters! Did they get fired? Did the MC find someone new, and remarry and finally get the chance to have a family?