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Carol lifted her head, kissed me and said, "Just give me a minute and I'll let you finish ok? I know that wasn't easy for you."
to be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 4 years ago13 paragraphs into the story,
he finally got his box of condoms bought and out to the car.
I'm thinking,
I do not need to read something this
slow,
introspective, and
wordy.
So, I abandoned the story.
Hint to authors:
if you do not hook the readers in the first few paragraphs (maybe half page),
you may lose them forever,
especially considering that there are thousands of Literotica stories waiting (although few of those are REALLY good).
Paul in Oklahoma
