All Comments on 'Live from the Game Ch. 04'

You never miss it until it's gone. Painful lesson that I'm sure she won't learn.

After rereading this after a few months I found some details that I missed and that make this story really terrible. First, this douche doesn't truly believe in real consequences for things. He plays the relativist game....what's good for me isn't good for someone else. So, his friend Charlie gets to remain blindly unaware that his whore of wife has been cheating on him for years....ignorance is bliss, right? So, why does he get to know and Charlie doesn't? Because he's a piece of shit friend. Second, even as he figured out that she's cheating on him and getting details he's trying to find a way to let her get away with it. Right until the very end this soft-headed moron is willing to let his wife escape. She could have run home...said she's sorry and he probably would have forgiven her. Finally, after all the lies, the truths where she admits that he's a washed up beta-male who's surrendered his self-esteem in the interest of being a better dad, husband, co-worker....general door mat. After all this he's still willing to take her back...he may get some crazy sex and even get her to be a wild child for him, but he's going to take her back because he's spineless. Years from now when his son finds that he's being cheated on this guy will be the one to tell him that it's just part of life and as a submissive male he will need to adjust to it and accept it. There is just so much complete nonsense flowing in this story that only makes sense when seen through the eyes of a submissive beta-male. BTB?? Nah.... RAAC until she cheats again because...well, he's never going to be strong enough for not to want to.

I think showing them fucking on the big screen was way over the top, but other than that it was a good story.

I liked the ending, too.

The only thing I would have done, is Karen to the asshole saying how he'd pass her on with the sale of the unit.

Let her really see how nice a guy he is, she still has that illusion.

I was enjoying the story until it got to "With a criminal prosecution, they had to prove that it was you, beyond all doubt. With a civil suit, you had to prove it wasn't you, beyond all doubt."

I hope nobody is getting their legal ideas from this, which gives the wrong test for criminal prosecution and not only the wrong test but placing the burden on the wrong side for the civil suit.

In a criminal prosecution the state has the burden of proof beyond a reasonable doubt (not beyond ALL doubt.) In a civil case the plaintiff has the burden of proving the case on the balance of probabilities.

You are, in my opinion, the one of the best, if not the best writer 0n this forum. You're story was realistic, logical and extremely well thought out. You're dialog between the characters was superb. 5+++

3 stars

Only because he divorced the slut and did not proceed to a RAAC - just for the sake of the children.

However, I really liked the 'Jumbotron expose' idea. It certainly removes all the doubt for both cheaters.

Talk about 15 seconds of fame! hahahaha.

I never ceases to amaze me to wonder why cheaters think they have any right to decide their own fate, when they are caught red-handed.

Finally, a wronged man who didn’t take the bitch back. The sooner that men understand that every woman lies, the happier they will be. It’s guaranteed.

I catch my wife cheating on national TV. Do I 1) immediately confront her, or 2) do I set in motion a convoluted, pointless scheme that requires me to to act, for several weeks as if nothing is wrong? This being the LW category, of course the option chosen is 2).

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This default plot template is threadbare and dull-witted. Surely there are more inventive ways in which to structure an adultery narrative?

In all the literalica stories that I read I've failed to see 1 important 1 important feet achieved and that is making the cheating spells watch the videos from start to finish.

This would stifle when I completely shut down all the b******* arguments I'd love only you et cetera ad Nauseum.

That would be tremendous feedback.

What would otherwise really be the reason for obtaining all of that footage and spending all the money to get it.

If it were me I'd just bawl out and then sue her and make sure she doesn't get any time with kids (her being too f-ed up in the head) and not even a penny and then let her be a homeless rat or maybe a stripper since one guy isn't enough to satisfy her itch down there.

This story presents an admirable examination of the phenomenon referred to as "compartmentalization". Spoken of, demonstrated, and supported by dialogue from several points of view, the ability of a human to split his/her life into several different simultaneous "realities" is thoroughly described. Often seen as a coping mechanism in response to long term trauma, it is shown here as a strategery utilized to preserve one's cake while eating it. We all do this to a certain extent when we separate our work and home personas. We speak of wearing different hats and of not taking things personally and of separating business from pleasure. This story illustrates how the use of compartmentalization is critical in the practice of ensuring that the cheated spouse is not harmed by the cheater's actions...until he or she finds out, of course. As such, this phenomenon can, in large part, be regarded as the "how" of cheating. It's the "why" that remains to be summarized.

LWlurker

I really enjoyed your story, well written and thought out. Congratulations, keep writing I want to continue reading more.

Man! you sure know how to weave a story!

Good good story! Thanks

I think he should have used thr audio he got about the guy saying bad things about her... Because she said he was a nice guy and stuffs... If he had used that, he could have broke her little slut heart, and feelings she got about her douchbag..

I love this story…AGAIN!

Some interesting twists to your story that I haven’t seen before, like the baseball camera gig. Plus I liked your lead in on the characters. We knew up front a bit about them. Thanks for sharing. 5 stars!

I can't help but agree with "oldmanbill69". Thanx for doing it. LP

VERY GOOD.

One thing though. He should have made Dianna watch the tape. MAX infliction of pain; the least he could get for the sorrow she infected on him.

Some may thing that you were getting paid by the word. You have created several characters that could be subjects of other stores. You're certainly able, it would seem, to bring them forth from your fertile imagination. Five stars but too intricately woven to be favorited.

Looking forward to Long After The Game.

I think the recording should have been played. The nice guy was just keeping his slut happy not partnering with her. The wild sex she had with her lover should have been discussed.

And he should have discussed the thoughtless gifts she bought him and the thoughtful gifts he worked so hard to find for her. Why did he consistently provide evidence of his love he cared while she did the minimum possible.

How did that jibe with her constant protestations of love

It is evidence that the passionate love was gone and she is simply doing the minimum to keep her meal ticket/babysitter in line.

He is no better than Chrystal covering for her great story

5 stars - i like this story

I will have to give this a 5-star rating even though it was too wordy in places, but mainly because the husband did not fuck his wife after he had confirmed her adultry... way too many of these loving wives' stories have the husband finding out the wife is fucking someone and then fucks her anyway with the justification that it was a revenge fuck... no way would I ever fuck my wife again if I found she was fucking someone else... I would come up with every ailment under the sun as an excuse until I was ready to serve her papers. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Deanna sees everything in terms of what she wants. She wants her life, but it's dull; she wants her lover because, reasons; she wants Ryan back because she wants. She wants this, she wants that. She, she, she. Jezazz beautifully places that into the story in many places. Nicely crafted.

"""Yeah, well, I'm spending a lot of time getting passed that need.""" Why do so many writers not realize the difference between past and passed'? 'As in he went past the house, and : He passed the lead runner'. Not hard to figure out, unless you are using voice to writing ?

Why go to all that pain and not save your energy for positive things?

I thought a very good story, nicely written put together with thought to how it would play out.

5 stars - again

Well that's a relief that it's not the end.

I have to totally agree with Dianna, there are some things that you wouldn't want to do with your partner, or just couldn't do. Pegging, scat to name but two. BDSM is another that could definitely mess up a marriage dynamic. Also if your partner was in a public facing position they most likely wouldn't be up for exhibitionism, especially if it could seriously damage career.

So I disagree with some of the MC's assertions. Not defending cheating or cheating, just stating facts.

Most damning though is that he's butthurt by his wife's betrayal and not knowing the severity of her feelings towards her lover.... So why oh why did he not play the tape recording of the lover describing her as a worthless whore. Not only would that have killed that relationship, but it would have also disabused her of any idea that she was in the relationship that she thought she was in. While also causing her pain and forcing her to question the very same things that he was now questioning. I.E. Trust - the ability to make accurate judgements about people and their real motivations.

To the anonymous that agrees with Deanna, it doesn't matter, you can't tell your kinks to your partner, you are defending cheating. You talk about trust, then she should have trusted him with her secrets about what excites her, so they can spice it up. You never know, exhibitionism could have been his kink, too. AND of course, the lover only saw her as short term, he didn't need to, she's already destroyed and Jordan likely cussed her at the game as she mentioned that he left her there. So with that, there wasn't a need for Ryan to play the tape because Jordan's actions did it for him.

Such a cute cute, snarky spin on such a very heavy subject matter. I definitely enjoyed this story and hope that the next saga is just as entertaining.

Great Job.

She let another man have her ass before her husband and even did sexy ATM with the other man. Maybe the cheating could be forgiven, but not giving away something she hadn't given her husband.

Read this before, great story! Just terrified the “ Forgiveness bug” might strike so I’m staying away from any follow up stories! The Bitch got Burnt, the bastard got burnt (at least there is talk of his divorce) if physically unhurt. I hope the author calls it quits at that point!

Good story, it kept me going. I agree, chapter 5 is not needed. I got past the first page and stopped, a mom and wife just doesn't talk like that. Also everyone keeps saying she is smart, she just doesn't come off smart at all.

Darwin, come save her lineage!

I still say Deanna is bi-polar - just like my wife was. She pulled living two lives, too, only she did Deanna one better. Her lover lived in our own home. And if you wonder, yes, their affair started before she asked me if this fellow could rent the room. What kind of balls does that take? And the charade went on for over two years with me continuing to be clueless enough to never ask serious questions. Only four years after the fact did she become guilty enough to fill me in - but no details. It is now 32 years later and I wish she would have kept it a secret.

Good story jezzaz, very entertaining, and kudos to you for the reality in the situation. Five stars.

Deanna is not bi-polar but merely a cunt.

"Yeah, well, I'm spending a lot of time getting "passed" that need." P A S T !!! That means; beyond. P A S S E D means; threw, as in he passed the ball. How do so many authors, even wit editors get this word wrong? Otherwise this is a great story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Much better than first chapter..The” keeping it in my pants” comment was a bit odd coming from a woman …