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"My mother was the most mixed up person, I've ever known, dad. She had three goals in her life, to see me and you happy! And to do down her stepmother at every opportunity that she could find. I think she succeeded in at least two of those goals. The only trouble was, she had the most miserable life of her own."
"You think so?" I commented, "I think your mother was always happy when she was with you."
"Not as happy as she would have been if we'd all been together, father." Mackenzie replied, then, she hugged me.
Well there it is and "Life Will Go On" as it always has too.
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This is the last that you'll read of Mack and his women friends here; that I will write anyway. I'd like to thank the many people who've followed his adventures, trials and tribulations, and who took the time to write to me with their thoughts on the tale. Mack sure did upset some readers in the earlier chapters.
Mack started out as a typical, dumb, proud teenager, who thought he knew it all. And who had the habit of jumping to conclusions far too quickly for his own good. His pride all too often got in the way of his common sense, as well. Like most youngsters, almost any pretty female - with a glint in her eye - could lead Mack around like a pet dog.
Personally I got to like the guy quite a lot towards the end of the tale.
- COMMENTS
AnotherChapterabout 1 month agoMack is just a man whore, don’t know why Lindsay would wait for him and can’t understand you’re rational for the story. Agree with chasbo38 below, too much fascination with all the sexual details just get to be a distraction. So Mack spends most of this story screwing anything that will hold still long enough, married or single, and then he gets outraged when his girlfriend screws a movie star. It isn’t double standard it reeks of no standards for him while holding her to some ideal he can’t even spell. Bullshit.
chasbo388 months agoQuite an eclectic collection of characters. Strange that Lindsay's character was a major mover but she never appeared in the story until the last couple of chapters. Not seeing anything from her side was a missed opportunity. But there your characters. Have to admit I skipped through the last three chapters to see how you chose to wind things up. Got tie of reading the sex scenes. Too much gratuitous sex makes for boredom.
Carry on.
Storm113over 1 year agoGreat story, I loved it. Well written. That being said, I liked Codi more than Lynn. I kind of wish that had worked out. Lol.
