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Bloodied and bruised, Buckland did not want to lose what he worked so hard for all these years. Taking up his cane, and with his eyes downcast, he limped his way out of the office. "See you in one month, sir."
Once the door was shut, the older gentleman looked at the two women and said, "I am really sorry for the suffering both of you endured all this time. I had no idea this had happened when it did; otherwise I would have stopped it. You ladies are free to leave."
"Mr. MacGregor?" Skyler softly spoke. Her voice trembled, and she worried about the possible answer to her question. Almost immediately she felt Devyn's arm circle her waist protectively.
"Yes?"
"Is there some way I can be reunited with the rest of my family again?" she asked with misty green eyes.
The bearded man took a deep breath before answering. He knew he had to assist these two women in some way to repair at least some of the damage which had been done. "Come with me to my office. We'll sit and talk and I'll tell you how we can best accomplish that."
The End
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoI’m sorry to say this, because I know how much effort goes into writing, but your constant use of passive voice (ie: “.:. Tongues were thrusting..” instead of “…they thrust their tongues together…”) completely put me off. Good stories are about people actively doing things, not about things getting done.
You have great story ideas, but I just couldn’t bring myself to read any more of them because of that passive voice thing.
Or as you might put it, great story ideas were had, but…
Scorat10 months agoToo many unexpected/time-travelling snippets at the beginning. Judging by the comments below it's an excellent story but I just did not want to try to follow it any more.
Roti8211Chanai64311 months agoA great story!
So much room for a prequel and a sequel, please continue with this story line!
So so good!
Thank you
Aquariusgirlover 1 year agoWow! What a rollercoaster! This story was as amazing as your others. I was initially a little confused with how it started and the 'time jumps'; I'm so glad I stuck with it
Definitely 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
BelindaTvDKalmost 2 years agoOhhh my gawd.....
Best story so far... And damn, I had to cry...
You're so good.. Love it..
Hugzzz
Belinda
