Mellisa, Mary Ellen and Me Ch. 02

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"Yes sir, I did."

Mind telling me why?"

"It was a matter of class sir, for lack of a better way of putting it."

"Could you explain that please?"

"Well sir, Mellisa and I are from two different worlds. I'm a hamburger guy and she's a steak lady. She is meant for better things and I know it. I knew that she could never get what she deserved from me. I knew that you and your wife expect better for her and so I took myself out of the picture."

"That's what I've always liked about you Ryan. You are a clear headed young man and you see things the way they are. You are absolutely right in your thinking, not that you aren't good enough for Mellisa, but in that her mother and I do have some rather high hopes for her. I think that getting tied down at her age could be disastrous. But your breaking up with her has presented me with a problem that I need your help to solve."

"Sir?"

"Mellisa is broken hearted Ryan. She has been an absolute mess since your breakup. She's my baby Ryan and it distresses me to see her in her current condition."

"I don't know what to say Mr. Sheets."

"I'd like you to do me a big favor Ryan. I'd like for you to get back together with Mellisa."

"Sir, I don't thi...'

"Hear me out Ryan. You were right in your initial assessment and you did what you thought was right. I want you to do it again, only differently."

"Sir?"

"Get back together Ryan. Make it work for a month or so and then do some thing that will make Mellisa break up with you. Make her want to hate you for the rest of her life. Make her want to put you completely out of her mind for good. I need you to be the bad guy for me Ryan. I need for Mellisa to get over you and focus her energies elsewhere. Can you do this for me son?"

Three months to graduation and I'm going to say no? Still, I wasn't na‹ve so I said, "What happens when I do this and she comes crying to you and tells you that I've been mean to her and that you should fire me? I mean we both know that she usually gets her way with you."

"You are doing this for me Ryan and I don't forget my friends. I'll just have to say no and be firm about it."

Yeah, right, I thought, but out loud I said, "Okay, but it will take some time to do it right. I'll have to make it look good, I can't just rush to her and say I was wrong and I'm back. It will be a gradual thing, but it will look right" and burn up a good part of those three months to graduation. Tuition and books were already paid for and I didn't need to sweat that, but I did need my wages for the next three months so I'd have a cushion if I had to go job hunting.

Ron smiled, stood up and offered me his hand. "Good man. You won't regret this Ryan. I take care of my friends."

To be continued...

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26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

This is a mess, but it's JPB and I have to see where it goes.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 5 years ago
Readers be warned. Male protagonist willingly eat cum.

It was absolutely disgusting that after the reveal he continued eating another man's cum.

Ruined the story.

I don't want to read about the author's strange fetishes.

It would need a rewrite with that cut out before the story is worth reading

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
And enter the rock and a hard place.

Now he's really in trouble. You've got the hook in. How are you going to save him?

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Too improbable.

I had to downgrade this chapter from 5*****s to 3***s for the following reasons. First, the perverted and gross anal and second, that he is so great that every woman is going to chase him even though he is extremely rude and abusive. He is not a movie star so that doesn't happen.

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Breeding time?

Yes, it's breeding time again. Story is exceptional, but I'd like to see you breeding both Mom and Daughter. Maybe Melissa will break up with you when she finds out that MaryEllen's baby is going to be yours, too. Of course Melissa needs to be pregnant by you at the same time, and her Daddy won't get rid of you because he cannot stand the scandal....

wetapapwetapapover 18 years ago
different than expected

but true to Just Plain Bob style and plot. I like it so far, bet i like the ending too. a fan always.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great story

now he knocks up mom and daughter.

Risq_001Risq_001over 18 years ago
Ok, bob. I really want to hate the story

But sitting back and looking at it objectively I can't. The major reason is that when looking through all you stories they show various ranges of creative abilities.

But don't let that mean too much of any thing either though. Personally I only like about 3/4 of your stories. By that I mean that I can read them all the way to the end without getting too upset (^_^). But that doesn't mean your not a good writer, just some of the stories aren't for me.

But I have to ask this question though:

Why do you often have the husband/boyfriend sucking up some of the leavings that someone else left while they were laying pipe in thier girlfriend/wife?

I mean, take this story for one. The boyfriend finds out that his girlfriend is intrested in having him go down on her after she has been with other guys. He's decides to walk away (god, most would be running), but instead of having him turn the tables, most often you have him just leave or bear the situation till it changes. Why don't you have him do something, kinda of revengeful, to let her know how it feels to have something like that done to her?

Just curious why though that the main character will often do something like that and then his usual form of revenge is often to go out and find a new/another girl to get with (who often is having him do the same thing), but regardless of how you have him do it, its like a backhanded attempt to get even with the first girl. Why not have him do something original and similar back to them to show them how mean and thoughtless it was for them to do it him in the first place?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good

I like the story the first chapter was really good i think it had a little more depth (story), where as the 2nd chapter was mostly sex with a little story. I'm a fan of your work, well written stories and there almost always seems to be a little bit of humor in them. To me the main character comes off sort of as a tool, he just seems to get used. There is more to him though as i have seen, he's by no means stupid. I want to see if there is (or could be) more to the main char and mellisa's relationship, was it really just (and still) about the sex and/or oralsex? Good story can't wait to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Weel Lets See How Bobie Is Doing in # 2

OOOPs - he chooses to eat another mans cum (the boss he hates) from his girls mother's cunt - swell thats really scummily sick - but well executed and believable?

Then the writer has also now decided to fuck up every character in his tail so as to make them equally crude perverted assholes. No favoritism here - they all suck!

Whats next - shoot some dogs, drown some kittens or what?

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