Mom Strips Naked for Nude Day Ch. 02

The mental, psychological and emotional conflict being developed within the characters was skillfully done. The depth of character development continues to build on solid ground. At 23, I can not believe the son has such a lack of self-awareness, self-assurance and sense of self. Finally, I can not the puritanical view of life the mother has. Only weak, closed minds believe in religion as much as the mother does. If the son had a spine, he would pack his bags and let her religious figurehead solve her personal, emotional and psychological problems. 5 star series, so far.

Oh the inner turmoil of life changing decisions; will she/won't she, can I/can't I, whose resolve will crumble first? Another tantalizing chapter

I was tempted to give this story a 4 as it seemed it should have been part of Ch. 03. It seemed to be more a transition between Ch. 01 and Ch. 03; but, I thank you for keeping the chapters to 2 pages or less so far, it makes stories written here much more enjoyable. Looking forward to Ch. 03, thank you.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this series

This is the 2nd Chapter, if you dont like it, go read something else.

It keeps moving forward, slowly, but tantalizingly ... enough elements of reality to continue to hold interest.

Yes it's long, but oddly entertaining too.

I'm intrigued, and will be reading to find out if these two get together.

So please miss Parker, keep writing, but don't worry about the critics. You can please some of the people some of the time........etc.

just thought it also funny that your comments, while probably written hastily, contain so many errors

Ex: until the rest of the chapters posts to read what happens because all your assessments this far has been wrong.

Truly Shakespeare has been reincarnated as Susan Jill Parker

I'm loving the buildup of your story keep up the good work!

Who knows, why you even read my story, other than to bash my story. Who knows why Who Knows hasn't written a story. Who knows why Who Knows thinks that the stories isn't moving forward, when it is.

Obviously, by Who Knows' incorrect comments and suppositions, he hasn't even read the story. He's just here because I've responded to him bashing my story. I've given him a platform. Only, Who Knows is making an ass of himself.

Go ahead, Who Knows, tell everyone all that is wrong with my story, when all that anyone has to do is to read my story to know that it's a quality story and that you're nothing more than a basher.

Actually, Who Knows, the story is more than 40,000 words and every chapter that I post moves the story along and never does his mother catch him masturbating, Who Knows.

Who knows why Who Knows is a basher but I think that I do. Who Knows always wanted to have sex with his mother. Only, she rejected his advances. Now, he goes in search for an incestuous character who is able to have sex with his mother.

Sorry, Who Knows, even your mother rejected you. Who knows why she did. Who knows why she named you Who Knows. Talk about annoying, your name is annoying, Who Knows.

Who knows why someone would be so deranged not only to read a story he didn't like but also to continue to comment on a story he didn't like. Only, Who Knows, the next time you go through the time and trouble to write a bashing comment, you should at least read the story first. Moreover, you should wait, until the rest of the chapters posts to read what happens because all your assessments this far has been wrong.

Thanks for posting comments to my story, Who Knows. All that you're doing is giving my story even more attention by moving my story higher in the feedback thread. Thank you.

Have a nice day and go fuck your mother so the rest of us real writers can continue to write quality stories for our readers and fans.