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Click hereMr. Glasses stares at my mouth while Yuki moves in until his beautiful lips are almost touching the stranger’s ear and whispers, “And you’re right, she is my sister.”
We walk away smiling. By the time we have taken no more than ten steps we are running full out, laughing. We are only two blocks from school and this early we can find an empty practice room in the music department, but we only have 35 minutes before First Bell…
does the boy actually fuck his sister, get his big prick up his sister's cute little coochie, blow his brotherly balls up his sis's little twat? I sure hope so.
Consumately written word picture, which allows the reader to "see" what is happening, and to "feel" and "smell" the flow of erotic juices.
The only thing that could have improved this story would have been if the journey had been long enough for Yuki to fuck Yui, with Mr. Glasses watching the hard cock sliding in and out of her wet pussy, and seeing the cum oozing down her legs.
I gave it 5 stars, simply because I couldn't give it 10.
I'm not sure if you were going for a Japanese feel or if English really is your second language (a few tiny errors and some slightly strange phrasing here and there, nothing serious), but it really set the scene wonderfully! This is one of the few stories I've read here that I might consider a genuine work of art, because of the wonderful way you manipulate the reader's reactions and emotions to evoke the responses you want. Well done! :)
I read this story once just randomly and spent the last few days looking for because it's just so hot and now part of my own sexual fantasies that I had to read it again. My absolute favorite story.
This has to be my favorite Literotica story. Not only incredibly arousing, but also well written. Great pacing, great detail. Wow!
This is a most beautiful, and intensely erotic, story. And all the more remarkable as I assume your first language is not English.
That story left me absolutely breathless by the end. Not to mention that I do believe that my favorite part is Yuki's words to Mr. Glasses at the end. Loved it.
But it sure would be nice to read something new by you. Quit being lazy and edit those damn stories you have lying around!