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"You'd better believe it." I carried Monique over my threshold in a symbolic gesture, we were together and that was how it would stay, nothing could upset us now.
If I thought that life couldn't get any better than this, I had my Muse, the woman of my dreams, in a couple of months I would be a father, I was seriously mistaken. "Cherie, I have good news!" Her happiness radiated from her every pore. "I have spoken to Maman, she has told me that Louis est morte, he is dead. One of his men kill him to take over his business, so we are safe forever." She kissed me more passionately than she has for some time.
"It also means that we can get married!" I kissed her in reply.
"Yes, my Cherie, we can." Her kisses were not just on my lips, they were all over my face. "I must send for Maman, she must be here for this."
"Yes you must send for her. Will we need to book a church and a priest?"
"Will you do this?"
"Yes. The church wedding isn't necessary in my books, but I think that it is important for you and your mother, so I will do it."
And that is how, a month later, I stood in front of a Catholic Priest and exchanged vows with my Monique.
- COMMENTS
HighlandLaddieover 7 years agoplenty of detail as to what happened and why and the scams going on.....
avidfaover 10 years agocould have been great. This was perhaps a nine page story that was truncated to 4 pages. The denouement on page 3 played like the last 2 minutes of a TV crime drama where the villain, without the benefit of counsel, explains the full details of the crime so we can go to the closing shot with a satisfied "Ahhh...!"
I don't begrudge the author abandoning a story when it loses his interest or the exigencies of life intrude, but notice must be taken with a moment of mourning for the premature termination of what could have been a wonderful tale.
Anonymousover 10 years agoYou always seem to write such good stories. I haven't been disappointed yet.
Boyd Percy
Sidney43over 10 years agoAhhh, we would all like to find our muse and you wrote about one that I would happily accept into my life. But wait, my wife would be very upset. Damn.
