My Sis and I... Ch. 02

Just want to say great story I wanna thank you for it and there's no such thing as a former marine thank u for your service whether for america or Canada I appreciate your sacrifices

Former Marine?

What the Hell. The're is no such thing.

....but the hymen is always up front, not seemingly buried half way down in like so many of these authors that like to write about virgins seem to think, heh. Always amazes me that nobody bothers to look things up.

The story is pretty fun so far though, looking towards reading the next chapter!

Some near the entrance, some further in. I would like to see this in the story, some mention of birth control, pregnancies between siblings always cause trouble. Good story, Screw the naysayers.

Since you have obviously met a girl who had a hymen left you obviously would not know where it was located. Give this man a chance, you were not always perfect. I think it is a good little story. How many have you written?

This is an excellent, very well-written story hot sisterfucking, by a gifted writer who gives his age as 18 to 22. I for one love this beautiful story. The happy coming together of Mike and his sister Julie is how lots of siblings would like it to be, but are too timid and cowed by dumbass social convention to follow their natural urges. Not Mike, though, who's a big tough Marine and knows exactly what he wants--it's waiting for him right there, between his beloved Julie's legs, his own sister's adorable little coochie. Julie's waited for her brother to bust her cherry, and Mike does exactly that (actually, that should be the job of every big brother). The story is even funny in parts, like when Mike gets a hard on kissing his sister, "She noticed and leaned down and jokingly patted the head of my dick through my pants, 'Hello to you too!'" They both know where Mike's big dick belongs, its natural home, his sister's cute little cunt. Mike is considerate and careful as he slides his big cock home, Julie right away starts cumming like crazy, which melts Mike's Marine heart, he loves her so much. He gives his baby sis a hot incestuous fuck, finally blowing his brotherly balls up his sister's sweet little twat (it even smells wonderful), shooting her full of his creamy sperm. I hope all goes well for this loving couple and for EroticaGuy. I'm sure his young cock was hard as he wrote the story and he shot a good healthy load at the end. I trust he's been shooting his loads up his own sister's honeyhole, where his sperm belongs.

For an amateur, your work quality is quite nice, and I can see the methodical precision that marks many Marines I've known. Keep it up, and ignore people like anonymous "take your own advice" who was likely one of your non-reading critics in the previous chapter. Just keep it up and keep developing. Btw, your sis, WOW!

Loved it

you need to take your own advice and think before you write this could be a good story IF you had proofread it and run it through a good editor before posting. if you write for yourself thats fine but don't post it. if you write for the readers make damn sure it is done right and use a good edtior before posting.

I am not just reading your story but I am also feeling it. I can feel all the emotions that you and your sister where feeling. I really love your story and I wish I had the money to make it into a move, if you do make it a movie I would buy it with no problem. Thank you for sharing your story.