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"Come on, I know teenagers are horny, but do grown men really check out every woman that walks by?" she asked.
"Not the ugly ones," I joked, "but yeah, all the hot ones."
"What kind of pleasure can you get from two seconds as you pass someone on the sidewalk?"
"Enough to get you through a boring business meeting. Hey, a guy needs to daydream."
She playfully nudged me with her elbow, but soon her head was leaning against my shoulder. We still chatted, but the whispers felt more intimate like that.
I thought about all the movies I'd seen in my lifetime that she had not. Some people might think of that as a generational gap that could hurt the relationship. All I could think is that I would love to introduce those films to her, experience them anew through her eyes and heart.
Soon the movie was over, and we discussed it for several minutes on the ride home. Then a comfortable silence fell over the car as I held her left hand softly.
I would have loved taking her to my bed and holding her close -- until our passions got the better of us and we made love.
But back at my house, the real world got in the way again. My daughter's car was back in the driveway, and it was time to go our separate ways.
Randi's hug and kiss told me she felt the same way, but still we waved as she backed out into the street and headed off.
- COMMENTS
Talonsreachover 3 years agoYou are worried about drop of of readership. Let me throw some observations out that may help you going forward.
Don't base your decisions on the 'stroke' folks just looking for a cheap thrill and once they get it they move on.
The ones that want to see this to the end, like me, are frustrated with all the chapters. Condense the story as a whole or append chapters to get a larger chapter. You can still denote each chapter in the document but the reader just reads on and does not have to exit the chapter and go searching for the next segment. D.C. Roi used your approach. Great stories which I love but the endless segmented chapters really takes away from the story flow.
Last, and most importantly, write for yourself. Don't get caught up on how many read a chapter once. Instead, write a classic where those that have read it will want to come back and read it again and again or will refer to it when posting a comment somewhere else (like I did with D.C. Roi) which will hopefully pique the interest of others to go and find the treasure referred to.. If you are just writing it for numbers you are writing for all the wrong reasons. You have talent. Continue to grow with it.
Trust in it.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoYour comment about possibly not writing more after this chapter made me sad. Your style is creative, sensitive and insightful, especially with a May - November relationship. Never worry about how many people read your writing. If only one person has been touched by your work, you are a success. I will write a comment at the end of this story line. Thank you! K
Anonymousabout 9 years agoTo be dating a young woman, how delightful. I think any guy would love to instruct a teen in making love and lust. Your story doesn't make it out to as creepy as it really would be. Was it Autuoms mom who wants to have coffee, yup jump on that plan. Have two women for a change. Would it be wrong to keep up appearances, and juggle some situations, or has this you g love gone to far
OH catching a long story at the begging I would expect some drop off. There are many good stories to distract us, thats whythe suggestions for longer chapters.
LittleHenryabout 9 years agoAuthorThe last two comments have been about the lack of sex in this erotic story. There seemed so much to tell in this chapter that, oddly enough, sex just wasn't what I wanted to focus on at that time. But I got back to the sex in Chap. 18, so I hope that's better for everyone.
Now it's time to get going on Chap. 19.
