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Click hereThe girls soon settled down and went to sleep until they were awakened by Bob's call that it was time for them to go fix dinner.
Having read a *great deal* of sexually-oriented books in my life, many of which were BDSM-related, I have to say that this is as well-written as the best, and better than many. The anonymous writer who called this rubbish apparently has no love of BDSM, or simply no taste - it's hard to tell which. I'm looking forward to Part 2.
(Incidentally, I did notice the "self possessed" and "below consciousness" phrases, but didn't let them bother me. I've seen *much* worse misphrasing - not to mention errors of fact - in many mainstream bestsellers.)
Overall, a fine read - one I'd be proud to have written!
repetitive and boring.... I don't know how I got through it all - I was uttterly limp by the finish
This is a great story and a solid '5'. I only have a couple of comments to make, but have to rush out and can't finish the story right now but didn't want to forget.
Here they are:
"They were all poised and self possessed." Do you mean self assured? If they were all self possesed, I wouldn't want to spend much time with them.
Some of this stuff is simple and beautiful: "As she fell asleep the thought of one of those men in particular left a smile painted across her mouth below her closed eyes." Just great.
"Just below their consciousness both Kate and Alison were aware..." I don't think so. One cannot know what happens below one's consciousness.
Otherwise, a great read!
Nathan
This is EXACTLY how I like my smut - bondage and group sex without humiliation. This is quite hot. Can't wait to read more.
All though I'm not usually into female bondage this was great like some one already stated not sadist but inticing please don't delay us to long even if its a page at a time continue the voyage. A teriffic idea of a story line and well written thank you
Wow... just loved the concept, characters and development of the story. Can't wait for the rest of the 'holiday'. Please write more soon.
An excellently plotted and written story. The characters are well developed and quite believeable, and the dialogue is fun to read. All in all, an excellent start to what looks to be a wonderful series! One day down, thirteen more to go!
Once again, I wish I had vacations with girls like these!