Pool Hall Disaster Ch. 02

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"They wouldn't let me stay with her, cause I am not family," James said as he and Pat shook hands.

"Thanks for taking care of her," Pat said as headed for the door to ER.

"Sir, you can't go back there," A nurse said as Pat brushed past her to where Katie lay, strapped down to a hospital bed, but no covering on her naked, blood smeared body.

Katie was strapped down to a bed with just a sheet over her as a Resident stitched her arm up. She was crying and struggling against the Dr. when she saw her husband walking towards her.

"Sir, you can't be back here," A large charge nurse said to him as she stepped into his path.

"Get the fuck out of my way," Pat said as the Marine in him rose up for the first time in a long time, and it felt good.

He simply moved her out of his way and walked to Katie, who quieted as soon as he touched her hand.

"I am so sorry, Pat," Katie began.

Pat just put his finger to her lips and said,

"Later, Katie. We will talk about it later."

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Chuckles1966Chuckles1966about 2 months ago

I always wanted to see a chapter 3 for this. Despite the idiot comments below.

MarkTwineMarkTwine8 months ago

An unfinished pile of crap. Please if you ever feel the urge to finish this story go find a writer that has a little bit of talent.

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

"WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING, SWEETIE?" He yelled at her as he saw blood flowing down her arm from her wrist to her elbow.

In other words...if this story continued, her being a dumb ass and trying to kill herself would set him up to be "forced" to accept his cucking.

Which is exactly what so many of these stories do, make the man feel so bad he be the reluctant cuck in the end. Thats clearly where this was going. Too bad to, because i did like how they gave it away.

TajfaTajfaover 2 years ago

An old story that remains unfinished. If you are still with us please have some respect for your readers and finish the story.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Marine

So he lets.his friend fuck his wife and does nothing. But when confronted by a nurse, he's a bad ass Marine. No cucks in the Corps.

OverthefallsOverthefallsover 5 years ago
Lousy story

And the worst part is that it's completely unfinished. Very unlikable characters. A husband that won't support or defend his wife. A wife that's a cheating slut. A predator "best friend". And some weirdo bartender. Which added up to not a single, likable character to root for. When you didn't finish the story you ended any chance the story had of being worthwhile.

Rc68Rc68over 7 years ago
Garbage

Let the diseased bitch die......

silentsoundsilentsoundover 7 years ago
Seriously bad

This plot had potential but was simply horrible.

Nothing was fleshed out and his immediate forgiveness was pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Finish The Story

I HATE stories that leave the reader hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
We'll talk?

What's to talk about? Too bad the cunt didn't bleed to death. She's a cheating whore. Hopefully Pat gets even, has own affairs... Yeah plural, don't get even get ahead.

Lonewolf2013Lonewolf2013over 10 years ago
Get real!!

No husband (ex-marine) is going to put up with the strip pool game or with the male best friend. I just could not follow the storyline it was just to unreal. He watches her strip in public, when he finds out about her cheating he walks away then goes back to her in the hospital. The worst part was when you made him a cuckold marine. This story just did not work. I gave this a rating of 2, and that is being generous. Writing was ok story sucked.

semofuncpl3semofuncpl3about 11 years ago
What the fuck?

Why would he go to the hospital. She was a cheating cunt that should have bleed to death.

SleeplessinMD4SleeplessinMD4over 11 years ago
The only reason Katie would cheat...

since she can fuck anybody as long as Pat is there is that her relationship with Rick rivals her relationship with Pat. How she could have video sex with Pat while Rick is in the roomspeaks volumes about her respect (lack thereof) for Pat. For Katie to fuck Rick more times than him also speaks to how she values Rick over Pat. I do not know if there will be a Part 3 but if Rick does not go this marriage is a joke. Not only is Rickgoing behind Pat's back to fuck Katie he has the nerve to try to control her (i.e., he picked the bar to play pool). I really do nt see this ending well since Katie has so much invested in her relation ship with Rick.

solotorosolotoroover 11 years ago
LOOK OUT

That poor bastard Pat is in a world of shit. That is one unbalanced manipulative bitch who has her claws into him and if he thinks this affair just started last month or that it's her first he is really stupid. A good marine knows when a position is untenable and a tactical withdrawal is called for. Lets see if Pat is a good marine or just a wimp-puppet dancing on her strings.

mabemabeover 11 years ago
Chapter 3

Don't keep us hanging too long. We need to find out what happens to Pat and Katie!

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