All Comments on 'Porn Shoot with My Sister'

An excellent well told story. Holds the readers interest to the very end. A well deserved 5 stars.

Only wished you did a sequel. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

This is one of my favourite stories. I come back it it several times for another read.

I always wonder what happened afterwards. I would enjoy an update as to how Alicia and Andrew are doing now.

Thanks for the story

Although this may be a fictional account, does anyone doubt in this wide world of ours, somewhere two siblings have indeed followed this path? The love of family is the strongest love of all, and the lessons learned in accepting each other are also, very strong indeed! As I grew up, my first "crushes" were on cousins because they were gorgeous, friendly, smart and (well) accessible, period. We never did anything like the brother and sister here but, as a young man I tell you even watching a cousin brush her hair gave me feelings of love toward her I barely understood! Just amazing, just gorgeous, oh yes, she was one of the most beautiful creatures ever to exist! And I had more than one cousin defining these feelings for me as I grew up, I had three of them! All incredible beauties and so very smart, they defined am image of how all women in the world must be, for me beginning in my pre-teenage years - when the only practical example of "love" I had experienced was exchanging simple paper St. Valentine's Day cards in Elementary school. So yes, it is the experiences within family that define the person we will become later, whether those were physically intimate, totally innocent or something more is actually less important than the long-lasting "lessons" learned.

Don't be afraid to tell someone how important they are to you, or were to you, because in all sincerity they have played a role in life as important as any parent, teacher or closest friend. Thanks Lovecraft68 for exploring these feelings and ideas!

This is one of my top 5 favorite stories on the Internet!

I have read many stories here in Literotica. But by far, this one grabbed me from the beginning and I couldn't wait for the next page. I have some actual experience with my step mom and one of my half sisters'. I hope someday to get the courage to try and express those memories into a readable story. Thank you so much for this. I will be reading more from your list. I wonder, do any of your stories have actual events that inspired them?

What an amazing story! It was so hot! The premise was wonderful, especially as it developed until the surprising twist near the end! This is the first story of yours that I've read, but I look forward to reading your others! Thanks for giving me a great turn-on with this one!

this is the first of your works I've read. i loved it! I'm now going to read the others. You have a gift that should be shared with all. I hope to see many more stories of yours.

A family I have grown to know. I would very much like to follow them into their future.

Plan and simple, a truly outstanding and wonderful story. Many thanks to the author.

Loved it. Got so turned on. I even leaked when the two couples got in the bed. Very erotic story.....dam.

I love this <3

I truly love this story it is so well written a nice mix of people involved. One of the best I’ve read in a long time.

Katsoimme siskon kanssa pornoa. Parhaita pornotähtiä molempien mielestä on Asia Carrera ja Lisa Ann. Teija ja minä nussimme kiimassa ja kuvittelimme tekevämme pornoleffaa.

Whew. I was worried it was going to be tawdry but it really felt like a story that could happen. Great work. Thank you!

That was awesome. Absolutely loved it. Thank you

Wow. Wow!!! This is the first story I have read by this author. Its absolutely excellent! Multi-dimensional characters that the reader cares about; well-developed story; positive energy; no gratuitous mean language. This story is easily one of the best I've read on Literotica! Cheers!!!

5 stars, I wish I could give it ten!

I’m not Always into a incest, but this story was the best I’ve ever read . Would like to see you expand on it. Also do or have someone proof read it for you . Too many errors

I’ve read several of your stories and I think your writing is really good.

I read this story several years ago and only today found it again. It was just as hot to read today as it was a few years ago. Great concept, great story! Thanks so much for writing this!

This is exactly the style of incest story that I enjoy. First their pre-incest life/sibling relationship. Followed by either a slow by a slow burn of growing closer, or being thrown into a situation where they are suddenly shoved close (like this one) and looking to spend the rest their lives together. Then hot loving affectionate sex, followed by a bit of follow up - a "they lived happily ever after". I rate this story in the top one or two that I've read on this site.

I too would love to read a couple of follow ups. First a follow up of the next few weeks as their relationship solidifies and grow even closer or a vacation for two story. Another where they decide to get a place of their own and settle in. Maybe another where they meet up with Steve and Mary.

Thank you for a Very Entertaining, Engaging and Very Erotic Story of Forbidden Fruit.

BTW an EXTRA BIG THANKS & KUDO'S for NOT giving Alicia ENORMOUS BIG TRIPLE F tits or something equally stupid. Nice firm Medium tits are....PERFECT!!

Kävin katsomassa esityksiä seksiklubilla, jossa sisko on stripparina, onneksi kukaan ei tuntenut meitä. Menimme hänen iltavuoronsa jälkeen hänen yksiöönsä ja nussimme paljaalla erittäin kiimassa. Sisko käyttää pessaaria, joten huoletta voimme nussia.

Teija on strippari ja tykkää ottaa suihin ja antaa pillua paljaalla.

Very well written; I would gladly read it again and again. Very descriptive and full of zest! Thanks for the great story!

incredible story once again from you. loved it. will definitely read it again and again...

This submittion is by far my favourite erotic novel ever. I love reading erotic novels, and this is really my favourite as of yet. Plot well developed, characters well described, and my favourite, plot twist at the end. This story had me reading for hours, and not getting tired of it at all. Plesse keep up the good work!!

A very very good story. Its now in my favorites section. the only problem I had was the speed bumps of some bad spelling, repeat wording and sentence structure errors. It slowed down the otherwise outstanding story telling.

Wow, that was incredibly hot! Thank you. I did enjoy this story immensely. Would love to read more of Alicia and Andrew...

Teija ja minä asuimme vuokralla tätimme Metan omistamassa asunnossa.

Olimme sängyssä nussimassa, kun Metta halusi kolmen kimppaan. Mahtavaa nussia kahta naista yhtaikaa.

Your bio claims that your stories are fiction. Well, not quite so. Very autobiographical, if I may say so. Your richness of detail and depth emotion tell your readers that you are writing 100% from experience, Mary dearest!

For the reader: yes, I know quite well what I'm saying. Having enjoyed Mary's exquisite sexuality and her husband's timidity over the past 20+ years, I can vouch for her insatiable libido in the face of a trembling hubbie.

Keep writing, my delicious FIVE STAR cunt-whore!

Teija siskoa panetti ja hän tuli sänkyyni alasti. Nuolin ja nussin siskon pillua. Ei käytetty ehkäisyä.

I need more. Why did you have to stop in the middle of very hot and sweet sex? Damn. You're evil.

This is a lovely, heart warming story. Thank you for writing it.Kvi5zk

Katsoimme siskon kanssa pornoa. Samalla nussimme kiimassa.

Great job.

Most mortgages are 30 year loans and its possible a second or even third one has been taken out for home improvements, car repairs, health issues, etc. so, it's entirely possible to have a home for 50 years and still not own it.

for me, the reality kicked in with this one in th first couple of paragraphs. The parents moved into the dads parents house some 50 years and the house is still owned by the bank. Doesn't add up.

I love your style of writing, but this one feels like its unfinished. Please continue with what happens next.

I made it halfway through the first page even though I was ready to quit in the first paragraph where the son was crying about losing the house. Add in another 6+ paragraphs detailing their personal finance and I'm out. Bored now and already hate the son and mother for being morons. Which means the premise is too flawed to hold my interest. Either 1. they are truly that stupid and I'm not into stupid people regardless of how hot they may be or 2. it's not believable because no thinking person would do that.

Just reread this story and loved it.

I enjoy these type of stories when I feel the love shown.

Thankyou for your story

This was one of the most beautiful stories I have read here on the site but also so HOT. This is the first story of yours that I have read and can't wait to get to the rest.

look you in the eye with my most serious expression and try as hard as possible not to grin as I put my thumbs up.

Great story, agree it begs a sequel but probably doesn't need one either, so confusing :)

Olin siskon kanssa käymässä tutun pariskunnan luona. He kertoivat olevansa sisko ja veli. Nussin siskon pillua paljaalla.

...and then knocked it out of the park! You took a chance telling the challenge story and upped the ante, but you delivered the goods. The story begs for a sequel but it might be better left as is with the promise of things to come. Well done

I cannot get over how hot that story was. You are a master at what you do.

Loved your story - reminded me of my hot sister. Would like to see another story about what becomes of Andy and Alicia

Wow that brought back some memories my sister passed away some time ago now but wow thank you so much for bringing back the memories just wow

I have not read a bad story you’ve written. keep up the good work.

Very well written story. It's so good that it could work with a different relationship between the principals. Things Alicia says ring true with my experiences, even though Andrew seems a little slow on the uptake. Most guys I know would have dealt with the hesitations much sooner than he did.

Several have asked for a Chapter Two. Add me to that list.

Really enjoyed the piece. I remember feeling like that with some friends of my mother's who came to visit with twin girls. One was really foreward sexually and we went for a walk one hot Sunday and we had sex in a woodland. It was my first time and my legs shook like jelly, so exciting.

Loved this from the beginning. Please write more, love the style !

ummm...more really i would like more please. ok chapter two ya ya ya that's it chapter two!!!

Really good character development. You actually make incest appealing.

well done I like the way you put the characters personalities together. As a favor could you make the next brother a bit smarter, I'm starting to get a complex. :)

Thanks for your story, I thought it exceptionally well written and pretty HOT!

This story was amazing. Enough so to inspire me to leave my very first commetn on this site, even having been reading stories here for almost 10 years.

Same as another poster, I thought the concept was very original, and extremely psychologically engaging. The sex with dialogue, the aggression of the sister balanced with her nervousness - all SO well done. Very very very good job you did here :)

please write a continuation of this story

Sis is hot and he fighting getting a peice of it. H o w nuts are you?

What a erotically hot story. Just loved it and with a happy ending with the siblings professing their love for each other.

Just great......

I thought this had a rather original premise. It's been a while since I've come across a story worth reading here, from the first sentence to the last paragraph. I'm not sure if I'm buying the motive of the couple at the hotel, but on the 1 to 5 scale, I gave this story a 5!

At the beginning it was soooo slow.

but as it went on , damn that was one of the best reads

That was an incredibly tending loving story about brother sister love, l loved reading every word, thank you so much for sharing, l was kind of hoping that Steve & Mary really were the kids mother an their uncle as l was reading the story towards the end, but whether that is true or not doesn't matter all that much to the story in the end, it was just an awesome story full stop, l just loved the whole story, hopefully one day there maybe another chapter or 2

I always love reading about brother and sister love it is the strongest love there is this story is very good and I would love to see another chapter but please don't include the mom it will ruin the whole story incest or whether I like calling it brother and sister true love is special to me I don't think it's right for mom and son or daughter and father is right it leaves a bad taste in my mouth just thinking about it

Please add more to this story

Great story - I'd love to have a follow up

One of the best stories I've enjoyed at literotica! (Lovecraft68 wrote two others in my top ten,too!)

An excellent story! Well thought out and nicely balanced between honest emotions and vividly depicted steamy love scenes. Thank you!

This story was absolutely amazing!! Great job

I think we need another chapter to this story.

I would love a second part.

Well written. It made me wish it could watch a brother and sister making love now.

A loving couple. What a great story!

Well written. I would love to watch a brother and sister make love.

Damn hot read, more please

About as good as it gets. Great story lets have more.

Thank you for a wonderful brother/sister story! I love that they began falling "in" love towards the end of the story. The characters were wonderful and the piece itself was great! I loved the interaction with "Steve" & "Mary" towards the end.

Now for the criticism: your editor sucks. There were three or four times in a row that thong was spelled "thing", distracting. Spelling in general, punctuation, etc. Again, all of these are minor in the scheme of things.

Thank you again for a wonderfully written brother/sister story! JJMemaw

Loved this story. I found it looking for a short stroke story, but quickly loved the characters. Great wrap up too. A fast favorite for me !

Very hot!!!

The build-up, the story, and the ending was perfect. The "little surprise" at the end made the story one of the best. I hope I wasn't the only one to put two and two together.

Well done, very sexy

I like how they're both hot (specially the sister), and that she's the one that starts the sex and actively wants it. Also I can't get enough of that dirty talking, specially if it's about a blowjob, Keep it up, 5 stars without a doubt,

fantastic

I read this story some time ago. When I started to read it I remembered reading it before but kept reading. It is a beautiful sexy story with plenty of true love by both the Brothers and Sisters. I enjoyed the story just as much the second time around as the first time I read it.

I am gradually reading all your stories and as yet have not read one I haven't enjoyed. I also like the slow built up which gives a lot more meaning and enjoyment in the lead up of the actual sex taking place in the way you tell the story.

Five Stars!

I love incest stories(brother/sister and mother and son) and you deliver with them every time. All of your stories are excellent. I would like you to add more brother sister stories.

Really incest and hot sex at its best.

I !iked the story line,did not know what to expect. You went down an interesting path. Enjoyed the piece.

Not for nothing but SO what a few errors

I read the stories for the content and the sex Duh

Too many people want to pick apart stuff and degrade others efforts

I can't write like this But You can So please keep on writing the Story was awesome the sex was erotic and Damn hot

Had me hard pretty fast That's why I read this stuff

So Thank you

Cs

Yeh a few grammatical errors... So what. I just enjoy the story. If I could write like this I would, until then... I'll read your stories everytime they're posted.

To Anonymous with the "SO" comment ...

First, if you had any balls, you would not be Antonymous

Second, your dismissal of the story for grammatical errors ..Total Bull Shit

Third, these stories are written by amateurs, not fucking Hemingway ..

GetALife.. AssWipe!

When the first sentence has a grammatical error, I have trouble proceeding.

"I sat there staring at the framed photo of dad and I at my high school graduation... "

Should be "dad and me." If you aren't sure about which to use, just take the other person out of the sentence and it becomes clear. You would never say "... a framed photo of I," so it's obviously "me". And then there's just sloppy errors like this: "... Alicia untied her robe and let HER fall..."

That was one of the most amazingly well written stories I have ever read. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

That story was amazing ! I just know it will convince all the brothers and sisters out here with convictions to throw caution to the wind and just fuck each others brains out and become lovers. I wish I'd had a sister like that when I was growing up !!!!

Once again you have written an outstanding story, encompassing all that we look for in this theme. Better yet, you doubled down with the revelation about Steve and Mary. Simply brilliant!

Given my penchant for looking at the down side of things, I had images of Alicia and Andrew making the video, being ripped off for the money, and the video being sold on the open porn market. I like your solution a LOT better.

I'm looking forward to your newest, "My Mother, My First". Even if it won't be the result of a challenge I'm sure it will also be great.

Needs another chapter PLEASE !!!!

The one part of the story that really turned me off was the position that Alicia and Andrew put themselves in. Dangerous in too many ways and not enough precautions taken.

I could understand the lack of precautions for most of it (young and desperate), but they should have insisted the other two appear in the video mask less and they shouldn't have let the video out of their sight until they had a known complete copy. Or insisted video was a deal breaker, but that means you'd have to control the location so you knew no secret video was taken.

Incest is illegal. You're on video committing a crime. They may or may not be identifiable by voice. If they release the video by intent or accident you're very likely to go to jail and they aren't. You can't use it for blackmail since you're committing a crime on it. With everyone complicit and identifiable, the video can't be used against each other.

Not a Lit Critic but from a Readers viewpoint, BRAVO. :)))

I've read some of your other stories; but, I think this is my favorite. I would love to hear of them in 25 year, happily together and with teens of their own who perhaps carry on the family tradition.