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Click hereAnd those final words she left me with?
Almost to the day, a year later, I found her. She had posted a singles ad. I had been trolling, and in fact looking for more girls to inhabit my solar system, having grown weary of those still crossing my path. I saw the face, which at first looked vaguely familiar, and then a shock of recognition bolted me upright. Her pictures were devastating. You'd have thought they were fake -- some scam artist stealing a few of a model's barely-clothed pictures from Stacked Magazine. She was gorgeous, slutty, and outrageously top heavy. But more, there was a world-wise cynicism in her expression. This is what you want, isn't it boys?
I wrote her a note. I couldn't help myself. I lusted after her again. I wanted her. I needed to re-live that night, and try and make a different decision the next morning.
Her answer was simple and clear and I still wonder if I deserved it: Baby, she wrote, I'll never be your porn star again.
- COMMENTS
AlexD2018over 5 years agoI thought this one of the most well written stories i’ve read on this site. I thought the narrative voice very strong and the descriptive qualities of the writing really stood out for me. I have a fetish for breast implants (though I prefer the rounded over muscle implant as opposed to the under the muscle teardrop implant featured in this story. The former - for those hi don’t know is the more unnatural looking implant), and greatly enjoyed the descriptions of breast implants in this story. I hope other stories by you feature similar female characters as I’d be delighted to read them.
Anonymousover 7 years agoNot true erotica but a short story about lust, social norms and the ugly side of beautiful people. This story could have been submitted on many different forums not just erotic ones. Writer has promising style and insight.
Anonymousover 13 years agoExtremely well done; most stories I've read here either focus mindlessly on the sexual, or go heavy handed with dry storytelling (which doesn't belong in the erotic section). Yours however, developed in a very short time a sense of character and tone that most authors have trouble establishing within the length of your entire story. The great characterization actually ended up lending more weight and pull to the erotic sections of the story. Never melodramatic either, you kept the cliche factor well under control. I've never been impressed enough by a story here to leave an encouraging comment before, but yours well and truly deserves it. Fantastic job, keep it up!
mrwrong972over 16 years agoNot only am I a writer, but also I teach writing, and I found this to be very well done indeed. The voice was original, the tone executed almost flawlessly. The pacing was good and the structure just complex enough to hold interest. bravo, very nicely done.
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