Primal Instinct Ch. 04

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Darlantan
Darlantan
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She went to twist, to kiss me, and I rotated my fingers, much to her ass's shock. She hissed and quivered on the bed, and a smile found its way onto my face. I moved my hospital gown and threw it to the side, running my hand up and down my cock.

A wicked smile was plastered across my face as I grabbed the untouched food tray beside my bed, and lathered my cock up in the ridiculous green jelly. Janelle's eyes went wide, and she stifled a giggle. I pushed the head of my cock against her ass, and the giggle tapered off into a low moan.

I gave a little thrust, and the head worked inside of her. Janelle reached back and spread her ass cheeks, gasping as I slowly fucked my way inside of her. All of a sudden, her squeezing sphincter swallowed my head into her heat, and Janelle let out another gasp.

The green jelly gathered in a ring around her ass as I pushed further and further into her. Janelle pushed back at me a bit, and I slid my cock forward until I had my balls pressed up against her pussy. She grabbed a handful of sheets as she moaned, and looked back at me.

"Now...ugh...fuck it into me, now...oh...Piotr..." A smirk hit my face as I began to move inside her, her ass tightly gripping my shaft. It was sensational. I reached around her slim hips and began to rub her clit, at which point her low moans escalated to high pitched squeals. I felt the stiches in my side begin to burn as my muscles strained, but the insatiable creature on the end of my cock was driving me insane with lust.

Janelle was writhing on the bed like she was having some kind of seizure, and her cries would have made me stop except for the urgency with which she tugged and pulled at my arms and cock.

I ran a finger around the rim of her ass, and collected the green jelly that had been pushed there. I reached forwards and slipped my jelly, juice and precum covered finger into her mouth. Janelle mouthed my finger as though it were oxygen, licking her lips.

Her eyes locked with mine as she looked at me over her shoulder, her tongue fully out and sliding around her lips, savouring the taste. It was too much. She squealed in pain as I pummelled my cock into her ass, building my sensations to an orgasm.

Janelle sagged onto the bed as I pulled my cock out, and began to shoot my seed over her. She turned around and wrapped my cock in between her glorious tits as I continued to cream her chest, the sensation of my warm cum coating my cock as it thrust through her cleavage made me spurt all over again, pulsing my cum out as it burst onto Janelle's throat and chin.

Her tongue slowly wormed out, tasting my cum. Janelle smiled. "Well, that's about the best thing I've had to eat all day. How about dessert?"

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Could have been so much more

I was initially very excited about Piotr's big badass Russian character, but he was really just a rapist for the first couple women. The sex scenes would have been much better if they were paced without him just trying to shove it in. I think you wanted us to think he was a deeper character conflicted about how he was becoming a man who treated women like chattel. It would have been more convincing if he didn't go through with rape, charging at those women and shoving it in. I was hoping he'd develop some finesse in sex, even if he was only trying to sate his 'beast' when using those women. His character fell rather flat, even after he found the woman he supposedly loved. It was difficult to be interested in the other characters as well. Janelle too quickly transformed into a seductive vixen from a damsel-in-distress that was hard to believe. Though you stated 4 months had passed, it was like I was reading about a completely different person. Her speech pattern in her seduction of Piotr sounded too calculated, as if I was reading about Karen (whom you convincingly portrayed as a bitch and easy to dislike) instead of Janelle. Then Piotr fights the thugs and the protagonists have sex, which was more of Piotr rushing to shove things into holes, then it's suddenly over. The progression to Piotr's love of Janelle wasn't well-executed. Merely stating that Piotr was falling in love without the actions to support it (other than the dryly-written fucking) wasn't convincing. This was more a story of lust than love when it came to Janelle. The idea for this story was a good one (badass Russian bodyguard fresh out of prison needing to protect woman who rocked his world from her corrupt husband) and could have been so much more if the characters and storyline were developed more thoughtfully! Disappointed the time wasn't taken to do this!

RhomanovRhomanovover 11 years ago
Very good series

Chap 5?

Great emotional tone to the series.

Thoroughly enjoyed!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Mail order russian?

Well hell, where can I order myself a Russian like that?? I definately want one! Thanks for a great 4 chapters.

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