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Click hereHer world went black.
Her breasts rose and fell, nipples now exposed against his frame. Her eyes rolled a little more before they shut. He slicked out of her, a puddle of their love making left streaking his floor. Jeffery rose a little feeble, his woman in his arms as he picked her up and carried her to his bedroom.
A pot of coffee brewed impatiently – this was the second one. When Adi woke she moaned and he was there, coffee in hand. It was real. It was awkward and she remembered it all.
He knew when he sat on the bed and she kissed him, felt his thigh and grabbed a fist full of his shirt. He almost spilt coffee everywhere.
It was all fabulous, well and good – except, as Jeffery sat there, he looked at Adi and asked,
"What, exactly, do you suppose we do now?"
The princess that she was smirked, "I'm game for a cigarette, actually."
Actually I think it adds something - a bit ee Cummings, a bit Emily Dickinson or James Joyce. Don't worry about it, keep writing :-)
this is an excellent, sexy story-
the only problem is that the grammar mistakes are so distracting!
Great story. Hope to see more from you someday soon.
- AchtungNight.
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