All Comments on 'Purely Sinful'

Just found this story today and was blown away by how amazing it was. I hope we get more stories like this and I'm looking forward to whatever Rozalin has in store for us. Amazing, completely deserves 5 stars.

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Could make an awsome movie series out of this!! loved it

Good job!!!

If Oscars were given for a job well done, I’d nominate you!!!

Awseome! A masterpiece!

I have never actually ventured much into the erotic horror genre. But your story has me absolutely hooked. I do believe you have an amazing way with words. I don't know if you'll read this. With the number of comments you've gotten. But I don't comment much under stories. But this was entirely to fantastic, to pass up the notion. Much love to you. For not giving up. I appreciate the time and patience you took to write this. As a fellow writter on this sight myself, I understand the hard dedication it takes to do this. And it is obvious that you are truly gifted in your doings. Please don't let it go to waste. I don't know what you have going. But your imagination calls for something great. Ive been dealing with an incubus in real life for over a year and a half now. Was very nice to see someone romanticize such a scary thing, and make it beautiful. For some reason it gave me a small peace of mind again. Lord knows my insomina has gotten crazy since the supernatural attacks have started. Anyway thanks again. Contiune the good work.

I rarely ever comment or star stories on this site because I feel that I am not in a position to critique others works when I am afraid to publish my own. That being said I give this a 5star rating because it literally carried me through the whole thing in one go. Usually I read until I find enough to masturbate to then I'm done with the story this time I was so caught up in it a forgot to masturbate till the second read through. Love the story and hope you make more like it or maybe a sequel.

It was a beautiful write up. I felt the whole story was like an unending flow. I really enjoyed it just took me some time to cover the whole thing but was in a one go nice marvelous beautiful story telling. Forget the sex it was accentuating the very story.

I have never enjoyed reading something as much as i enjoyed this, thank u so much

This story was a wonderful read I wish their was more I've read it multiple times it has great depth. Also the character development is great as well. I did not want the story to end.

Excellent story, thoroughly enjoyed it from start to end. Never felt bored or wanted to skip chapters, as with some stories they loose their spark n fizzle away.

There must always be a Lich King

THE SEX WAS GOOD BUT THE STORY WAS TOP DRAWER - I CANNOT TELL A LIE - I READ IT FOR THE STORY, n AFTER THAT, THEN FOR THE SEX.

- THE PERSONALITY OF ZAFIRA WAS ACTUALLY SEXIER THAN HER BODY - n I KNOW THAT I'LD LOVE TO HAVE HER, HER CUNT n HER TAIL EVERY FUCKING NIGHT : CHRIS

I started reading this for the sex, HOT HOT HOT. But soon the story became the real reason to read. Enjoyed it.

Came for the sex, stayed for the tale.

and still a epic story.

Incredibly predictable. Rosa practically screams to the reader that his wife was a tramp and Frank was the father. Should have forgone the happy ending to keep with the noir theme.

Sexy, beautiful, well written. I am astonished. Thank your for allowing me to read that.

That was really good. Thank youyou

Fuck. I just read through this terrific story four hours straight... Amazingly well written <3 Loved it till it ended.

this was an amazing read that actually made me cry for the first time in over a year so thank you for bringing it into existence

I can see why its an award winner. voted five stars

... who swears unnecessarily but, FUCK, that was a simply awesome story.

It had me gripped from start to finish, especially the last couple of pages with the "will she / wont she" die. Spectacular, thanks. 5*

This is a really great story, I enjoyed every chapter. You're a good writer. Keep it up

I loved every second of this story. The only thing that made me scratch my head was how they did nothing for Zafria's pet after she was killed. I understand that maybe demons wouldn't exactly burry their own but it felt more like: "She's dead! No! Ok moving on to the happy ending". Sure if might be because now when she is dead she technically isn't there anymore, but from how Zafria's personality felt she would maybe mourn her loss even if she could now be with Cole. Or did she not care that much after all? Or can she go through he stages of grief in seconds?

AND IT WAS WORTH EVERY MINUTE!!!! Please keep writing these. This story went from sexy to heart breaking to action and back again. Love it.

its already 4am where im at😂 totally worth it dou,id pay to see dis in the movies or like an actual book

i have read this story 5 times or more and it is just awesome! one of the best on this site hands down, i need place for 10 stars!!

I usually never write comments for the stories nor do I read such long stories but this one..

I should say, one of the best I have ever read!!

I wasn't even aware of how the time went by..and it changed from night to early morning.... definitely a binge worthy read!!

Your novella is wonderfully written! Please consider publishing professionally, you are a fabulous writer with a beautiful imagination.

I loved this so much!

This story is just great. It made me cum and cry many times. I am not a fan of reading and I don't think I have read a fiction this long, erotica or otherwise. Yet this got my interest from start to finish. Just wow.

This is not only my favorite succubus story on the site, this is one of the best pieces of writing I have ever read. This story is everything I love to read: action, sex, and an in depth plot line that covers the gambit of human emotions. Honestly, this is worthy of being published professionally, it’s that good.

i would buy every book you write. this was fantastic

That was truly a joy to read. Thank you for taking the time to post it.

My only wish after reading this story is only if life could be this wonderful.The author's work surpasses my ability to criticise.My only capability is to relish the satisfaction it brings me.Hope if the author could post more of her/his work.

Honestly the only thing that creeped me out more than the little bit of this story I could get through was the fact that it had a thousand plus favorites. Was it the description of his wife's rape and murder that people enjoy? Or maybe Cole jerking off to murder sex and then comparing a demon's kiss to his dead wife's?

Well, either way, I couldn't make it past three pages and I'm still gonna be trying to forget this story for a long time to come.

At last after so much B/S a real crafted story!

This piece was indeed- truly, a perfect ten. Salute.

The best literotica epic I've ever read!!!!!

This escalated quickly, excessively so during the last two pages....

I literally stayed up all night reading this... it's now 6:31 a.m. and it was time well spent! Thank you so much for a fascinating story with memorable characters!

Couldnt stop reading this either, took many hours, but well worth it! Your very talented, would love to hear more from you.

Amazing story and well written! It kept me glued to it to the final chapter! I loved the twist and turns it took! You could write a novel based on this plot! Wish you the best of luck!

I totally agree with CuriousCubed—could not stop reading. I didn’t exactly stay up all night, but it is well past midnight and I just finished. I’m still grinning from the ending.

This would make a great movie. Get a couple of young “no-name” actors (like Robin Wright and Cary Elwes in “The Princess Bride”) and you’d have a winner.

Thank you for posting. I really loved it.

I didn't want this story to ever end. I could not absorb the words fast enough to satisfy my mind. Surprise after surprise. I loved it is not enough to describe this story. More, please, MORE!!

Thank you!!

Gary Lee

Best story ever! It has humor, it has happiness, it has anger, and of course some erotic sex scenes. They should make this into a movie. Once I started to read this , I couldn’t stop. Great work! Please keep up the great work. We appreciate your talents of story telling .

I really enjoyed that story. I honestly was looking for something that captured my attention. It took me a few hours to read it as I did chores and made dinner but I was anxious to get back to it. It was one of those stories you don’t want to end.

Thank you

I had to read this again and again. It is a most amazing piece of work and I want to turn this into a film. The whole basis of the story is very convincing and believable and with tone down this could be a box office hit. Absolutely amazing. Please author get in touch.

Very well written. All the ingredients for a very entertaining read.

I have not been engaged on sth as much as with this piece.

Really great plot and narrative and exquisite writting.

I would love to read more from you some time.

(English is not my Native Languaje so this might be not perfect)

One of the best stories I have ever read. It was so so good and so unpredictable. Loved every single part of it.

I absolutely love this, may be the best story I've read on here♥♥

It was the perfect story. That is all I can say about it.

Kept me hooked all the way through. Incredibly well-written with a great plot. Absolutely loved this story. Thank you!

You should. Bravo!

I just spent 2 hours reading it and I became beautifully invested. This is amazing.

Just wow!!!!!!

This is the best piece of literature I have read in a very, very long time! If you haven't gotten published officially yet, you should definitely pursue it!

It takes real talent to turn something so delectably vulgar into something as exquisite, tasteful, and classy as this tale! A real inspiration!

It deserves to be made into a high budget film.

I absolutely loved it!

Somehow mixes wholesomness, eroticism, a genuinely intriguing plot and moments of utter loss and grief. I came on here for a shameless nut but ended up reading on of the best stories i may have ever read.

This was awesome and you definitely left room for another part

Thats one of the best pieces of writing ive had the pleasure to read on here, i got so engaged with the characters - superb

One of the best I've read just couldn't stop reading it had some good twists,waiting for the next one soon I hope.

This story has been the best I've ever read. My only disappointment is that I see it was written quite some time ago. I sincerely hope you have continued to write and that I stumble on your work again. I will be your biggest fan.

I decided to read in this category as a change. There were a few grammatical errors, but the author has a tremendous imagination. To create a supernatural world with an erotic conclusion such as this borders on the genius such as Edgar Allen Poe. I think Rozalin should be talking to a magazine or book publisher.

If I could, I'd give you 50 stars for this. Sadly, you'll have to be satisfied with the maximum of 5 they allow. Thank you for this. I'll still be applauding in my dreams. If you ever publish in the mass market, please send me a message telling me who I can buy your other works from.

What I really enjoy is the way you build a fantasy world and take the reader with you. This is my first story in the Erotic Horror genre and it really worked for me. The hot sex is fantastic and over-the-top and has deep resonance with real-world sex for ordinary people like me - and I think the same applies to the resonance between the world of magic, demons and angels and life on the more conventional dimensions of earth.

I like it very much I hope you going to make more succubus stories in the future

This is simply art. It drew me in the more I read and I couldn’t guess what was going to happen....well not really. Brilliant piece of writing and story telling. Kudos!

Absolutely outstanding. Thank you so much for a wonderful sexy story. It was enthralling and I finished it in one sitting.

Stephen King, Frank Peretti, Tom Clancy and Louis Lamour should all be jealous of your work.

Absolutely amazing! So creative as to be fascinating... so well written as to be totally engrossing. I couldn't put down. Thank you!!

An amazing and engrossing read! I was hooked after the first chapter, and I had to sit down and read it to the end. Bravo!

I couldn't put it down. Stories within stories. Great job.

This is the first story I cared enough about to come back to and spend time thinking about from this site. That in itself is really, really a testament to how good this story is.

To say that I empathize with both protagonists is putting it lightly. They were both so well written given the relative short nature of this story. Both had wants, desires, goals, personalities, etc. in abundance.

The story progressed at an even keel, and even though I did see the plot twist coming, I still appreciated how well it was established.

The climax of the story, of which I will give NO spoilers, was powerful, and I admit, I felt myself struggling with my own thoughts and questions in that moment. How would I respond? Would I go through with it? Again, no spoilers, and I hope this was vague enough to keep it so.

All in all, this was well crafted, well written, and an enjoyable piece that I will likely be coming back to re-read. This is erotic literature done exceptionally well.

this was the first long story i actually stayed committed to reading. i loved it so fucking much and i loved the conflict in the last few pages. i also really liked how it wasn't fully centered on sex if you get what i mean, definetly a fav story

This is marvelous writing on display! Words would fail to describe the emotional rollercoaster on this erotic journey, leaving the reader not only satiated yet yearning, but also a little wiser and courageous. Feels ample and full to take on the adventure called 'life' head on.

As an avid reader, I follow an advise given to me very long ago. 'start more books (or stories), quit most of them, read the great ones twice'. I must admit, I feel a definite carnal-like desire to start reading this all over again...! And may be again and again. :-)

Warm regards,

From India.

This is one magnificent piece of work. I wish i wasn't broke af to buy the whole book. Maybe someday...

Anyway, thank you for the story. Truly enjoyed it. It is one of the best stories I have read here. The plot, the characters, the emotions, every fucking thing in literature was top notch.

I sincerely hope that you write more stories here on Literotica, you know if you can. We readers would be immensely grateful.

i don't usually leave comments but this was impossible to stop reading... the best!!!

This is masterpiece. Amazing work.

So Like most here, I started reading to find some stress relief. However a few chapters in, and I was pretty hooked and binged the whole story. To put things in perspective I lost interest in the ( very well written) sex scenes and hurried through those parts to get back to the larger story. With a little polish this could easily be bundled up with other in-universe stories and sold as an anthology professionally. Dude, BRAVO!

Woooow I had no intention of coming here and finding a story that I would fully immerse myself in but I did. This was absolutely masterful from start to finish. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

The depth of caracters and plot are astounding. I am sorry I could give you more than 5 stars!

Re-reading this after quite a long time, I still think it is very good. Underneath the rollicking yarn and the apparently simple rules of "pure" and "impure" souls lies a very interesting discussion about what is and is not OK between beings. While Zafira defines lust also quite simply, I think the story asks deeper questions - suggesting there are no simple rules, rather an ongoing set of choices that are based on love and care for the whole ecosystem. And I like the way "pure" doesn't actually exclude extreme sexual pleasure - just getting it at the expense of others.

I just read through it all in one sitting, an awesome yarn, complex enough to cover a lot of detail, great character development WA76uyand quite well written, thanks for writing this.

Good vs evil and love always wins in the end. A rollicking tale that was super enjoyable! Thank You!!!!

There is nothing I could say that could compare to what I have just read.

Rozalin,

Thank you for the wonderful story, you are a masterful storyteller.

I enjoyed the humor between Zafira and Cole, most of all their love.

Thank you very much.

xoxo,

tedi

This is amazing. Kinky, scary, beautifully written. All around a masterpiece. Perhaps I could write a sequel, if that's ok with you? Read this 8 times already and I only found it yesterday. You are a great author! Keep it up!

The two thugs that tried to mug Cole and Zafira never stood a chance

Loved how she instantly turned the tables on both those lads and forcibly made their bodies aroused beyond normal limits and made them strip completely naked in the cold night,they were so erect and rock hard as they teased her body,their cocks just leaking pre cum profusely.

Them being unable to break free of her spell was so hot,could you imagine your cock throbbing uncontrollably while your balls just fill up up with potent creamy loads as you are forced to have sex with a mystery woman instead of running away to save your life.

She essentially turned those men into living dildos that had one final purpose in their pathetic lives, which was to plunge their swollen ripe cocks into Zafiras silky Throat or her soft warm pussy or her tight hungry asshole until she came hard and deliciously on their over aroused fat members all while their balls overflowed with salty thick cock cream as their bodies beg for release.

It made me so wet when she made those doomed men exert their bodies beyond physical limits by forcing them to keep fucking her body super fast under her erotic spell before orgasming hard on their primed cocks and making them moan groan and grunt helplessly as their bodies finally gave out in sweet agonizing pleasure as they were able to blow the monstrous loads into her wet hungry orifices.

Would have given anything to see the look of sheer ecstasy on their faces as their overloaded balls swiftly tightened as their large twitching shafts fired load after gooey load deep inside the sexy Zafiras demonically spasmsing rectum and her wildly convulsing vagina

The looks of ecstasy and pleasure would then have quickly turn into looks horror and despair as their overworked bodies finally divert all life forces to their still heavily ejaculating cocks as their hypnosis is broken and they witness the sinfully gorgeous demon girl about to extract their sinful souls through juicy cocks embedded deep in her butt and cunt.

It would be the perfect final thing they saw as their souls are then infused with thick ropes of cum firing uncontrollably from their thick erections and pulled hard and fast through the cock holes into Zafiras hellish and torturing afterlife as their now dead bodies are left unable to scream even once

Bad boys got exactly what their sin stained souls deserved

That was the best story I have read yet please please please write more

I loved this story so freaking much!! Just beautiful!

What a beautiful story

One of the most beautiful, captivating and amazing stories I have ever read

Beautiful story, hats off to the author.

I would have turned it into a movie if I had the resources.

You have a beautiful mind and vision to think so beautifully and transform it into such mesmerising words. Well done.

Best read ever. Well put together and a great story.

Rex W.

Best story ever written

It is different,

But

Not bad at all,

Unless you are a ****

This was super good! The author clearly put a lot of time and effort into this

Excellent, Thank you for your time, your work and your imagination.