Rhythm and the Blue Line Ch. 06

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PennLady
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"You say that like you've done it before." He guided the car on to 395, which was all but empty at the late hour. It was an odd feeling to be so alone on a road so often choked with traffic.

"Once. Managed not to hurt anything but my pride, although I had a pretty good bruise on my leg for a few days."

"Think you can get inside without tripping over anything?"

"Maybe. I'm pretty tired. Maybe I should sleep in the car."

Brody shook his head with a laugh. "No, I think we'll get you upstairs. Your place or mine?"

Ryan opened her eyes and gave him a baleful look. "If you think I'm going to do anything but sleep once I'm in a bed, you need to think again."

"I'm pleased you think I have such vast energy reserves, but I was referring to sleep myself." Brody took the exit and stopped at the light at the bottom of the ramp. "So," he said again, "your place or mine?"

"Yours," Ryan said. "You have better breakfast options."

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Author's Note II: I hate to have a lag, but revisions to the next chapter may require a little longer time between postings, but rest assured I will post and I will finish. But I need to get it right.

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PurplefizzPurplefizz5 months ago

Pretty awesome story tbh, but the story arc needed to be shorter unless there’s a very good reason for it to be a slow progression piece, i.e. you’re trying to convey how long someone is waiting or is bored or to portray a pace of life in a small town etc, it’s moving needlessly slow at present, *boy meets girl, gets to know her and they both see the other working*… that’s it so far, the rest is window dressing - including the sex tbh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

These are great characters, really well drawn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You make me do the Oliver Twist

Tantalizing. Can I have some more, please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More more more...

I am loving the story... but now I want more more more....lol....

lost_in_youlost_in_youover 12 years ago
Loved it!

Loved this chapter! Seeing all the hard work with the band pay off with a successful show had me cheering with everyone else. Ryan and Brody's relationship is so easy-going. I love their rapport.

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