All Comments on 'Sacrifice'

Wonderfuly written, and a nice length, not too short yet manageable but what happened to the other girls and what happens next, I look forward to chapter two

You have a very fluid writing style. I loved the slow build up. When the characters got together, it made sense. There were a few spelling mistakes that tripped me up; but other than that, it was very immersive.

Although I noticed one or two small errors the story was very entertaining and well written. I enjoyed the suspense and uncertainty at the beginning. I really liked the heroine of the story taking her sister's place and then turning what could have been an awful experience into something good. I thought your characters especially the girl were well thought out and your story line built until the end. I do hope however that the story has not ended just started. Thanks!