All Comments on 'Sandi's Mistake'

by Just Plain Bob

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RhomanovRhomanovover 11 years ago
Tad bit confused .....

Why the good attorney?

Divorce ever occur?

If the attorney, why never visit?

Etc...

This has too many broken / unfinished threads.

DunaDunaabout 12 years ago

What a mistake! Why did not he divorce her? So less murder would have been and more room for true criminals in prisons.

terrydavidterrydavidabout 12 years ago
Great story, JPB.

One of your few non-wimp efforts - this story finally has a male character that does not wimp out and actually the slut wife was almost "like-able" due to her insane behavior of killing the other brainless dick. Wish there were more good revenge stories out there.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
Great Story

Rob found his wife was cheating, investigated the situation and told his cheating wife it was over. It's just icing on the cake that she killed her lover and now has 20 years to think of what she lost for betraying her husband

Lesson learned. Don't cheat on your spouse.

Consequences abound.

MissouriUSAMissouriUSAover 13 years ago
Pretty Good!

She got redeemed a little bit and he wasn't forced to take her back. Thanks for sharing the story.

likeboblikebobover 13 years ago

Thanks Bob but wouldn't a divorce while she is in prison make more sense than having to fight for one when she gets out? Not to mention the benefits she would be entitled to as his wife when she is freed.

grogers7grogers7over 13 years ago
One of your best

Well written, well conceived, original.

lagrimas458lagrimas458over 13 years ago
Good, as usual

You have a great way to weave a story into a very good and captivating story. I really enjoy reading your stories. Keep on writing.

Ducky7Ducky7over 13 years ago
A good one this time

demantoiddemantoidover 13 years ago
Brilliant story

Great tension, taut plot, and two interesting characters. Oh and a terrific ending veering so dramatically!

OldHidekiOldHidekiover 13 years ago
Good Story

It was interesting to find out who had sent the e-mail, and how that played out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent!

JPB,

Great job--as usual.

Matt

Scarecrow51Scarecrow51over 13 years ago
In most states

he could get a divorce for a few hundred dollars as she was a convicted felony.

victoriangentvictoriangentover 13 years ago
It looks

like the true value of Sandi's co-workers free advice was worth every penny she paid.

Good story Bob, of course I expected no less. The meticulous approach to the problem by the protagonist and the manner in which he executed it was priceless. Justification for his actions was well proven and the result of those actions will serve him well in moving on with his life free of any guilt on his part.

JennyBearJennyBearover 13 years ago
Nice

Paybacks a bitch!

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Fine Story

Interesting and decided protagonists. The woman was as interesting as the husband... Thanks, JPB

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
Thanks for a great read

Nice story really enjoyed it this mornIng

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
A good read

Really fast paced story, interesting and a happy ending.

Thanks Bob for the good story

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 13 years ago
Aw----Sweet, sweet Justice. Something the world just dosen't have enough of!

Gee, JPB, are you thinking of making a New Years Resolution? I like most of your stories but I really like ones where the husband gets some retribution on his betrayers. Keep it up, Please........

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...

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