Nick Claus was gone.
There was a small wrapped box on the pillow where he should have been. Sitting up, she did not bother cover herself and picked up the present.
There was a card on the top. It read: It's been fun, my lusty vampire hunter. Until next Christmas. Same time? Same place?
Pulling the ribbon, she opened the box. Inside was a small Santa doll. She touched the toy and it tapped its pouched belly and released a high-pitched Ho Ho Ho, Merry Christmas!
She fell back onto the sheets with a small laugh. A smile teasing her lips, she traced the edges of the card, her blood buzzing.
The hunt for Santa just became much more interesting.
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Hot story
Even with the grammar issues. Hope we see more from these two!!
Talk about Romance between a Talibani woman suicide bomber ......
........ & a handsome Mossad agent !!?
Wow!
Hot story, unique and interesting. I'll be reading it again!
This was a great story with a unique premise. There are a few grammar issues, though--mostly shifting tenses--that took away from the story. Just a bit more editing and it would be a 5!
That was fun as well as hot, I look forward to another chapter next Christmas.
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