All Comments on 'She Came In Thru A Bathroom Window'

Though the plot was transparent, it was carried out well. 5 in every way.

What happened next? My guess: 2 divorces. 1 new marriage an Danni has her dream father.

Chester and Dottie are just too close to the MC who loves them deeply.

Strong moral in the story: Deal with it upfront before the innocent become collateral damage.

Harddaysknight, you are one of the very best. Thanks!

The Hoary Cleric

4 Stars on this one ..Get a lawyer and start suing everyone

Finish the damn story...

I agree, I think this story needs more. Usually your better at least have a semi-good ending point.

And thats really.how u end ur story what a smuck

4 Stars as I felt that this story needed another page

Yeah it seems everyone agrees it is definitely unfinished.

Wtf???? As is plainly shown in the remarks below….If you can’t or won’t FINISH THE DAMN STORY don’t POST IT!!!

I knew it the situation was revealed, and the truth finally came out, but the story ends with no conclusion so I changed mine from a 4 to 3

The story IS finished. This is a short story, not a novel. Whatever comes after is a different story.

Dave was red-faced and sweating while Debbie had collapsed in a ball on the floor.

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...after watching Dave with Debbie for a couple minutes. He has her mastered.

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Dave helped Debbie up and led her from the room.

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So, what? Debbie is apparently a submissive? Can't help but wonder how *long* Dave has owned her.

Interesting that no one attempted to beat the shit out of Dave.

Safe bet that Debbie won't be getting invited to any more family gatherings.

Not another unfinished story! Ffs I find this so frustrating. In response to the comment below. You're wrong it is unfinished you can't say it's finished because what comes after is a new story . What happens next? Oh yes nothing because its not been written therefore this is an unfinished story. If the author intended a sequel it would have been written by now so ergo this is an unfinished tale which is very very frustrating for the readers. This is a really good story with potential for being excellent but instead is now poor because of not finishing it off. Not happy BardnotBard

Very well done but needed more ending.

Absoluetly spot on. Classic short story. A piece of fiction that matches the real world. And not one further word is need be said.

Sad, well written, makes a desire for capitol punishment for adulterers seem reasonable.

What a moron anon of 20 days is - when you run out of words THE STORY IS DONE! If you want a different ending you are free to finish it for your self. Second read, still 5 stars.

somewhere east of Omaha

What you wrote is good, but feels unfinished. I would have liked to have seen at least an epilogue telling the consequences of how the cheater's lives turned out. Still, gave you full marks.

Very well done!

It feels like a French movie, unfinished.

It could’ve been a great story if it had a proper ending. Oh well, as they say, it is well worth the price I paid to read it.

The shit storm over the ending was amusing to read. The story itself was well written.