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If she hadn't been so intent on becoming the next Madam of the Whelan pack, she could have become so much more than the wanton little tramp she turned out to be. He had no idea what happened, but knowing little from the gang so far he was sure it must have been something really wrong that had gotten her killed. A part deep inside of him reared its ugly head. It wanted revenge for the pack, it wanted out, it wanted blood, it wanted to bath in the blood of all those that would die, it wanted full control.
Ed shook his head, telling his wolf that he had to bide his time and that when the moment was there, he could have a little fun and play. They would avenge the killing of a pack member.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoDidn't realise it was the same Dolores from the first story. She did a lot of messed up things, but atleast she went down fighting in the end. To bad she couldn't do a little more damage though.
I am so ready for Ed's story and curius to see who his mate will be.
Keep on writting. You are very talented!
LadyTiger
secretitoalmost 12 years agoIf taking too long in between postings is the worst complaint you get, you must be doing something right. I just think its unfair to base your rating on that. As someone said before, better that you post something you are happy with. No matter how long it takes, at least in my case, I have never been disappointed. Obviously I still keep coming back.
Anywho, another wonderful chapter and because I didn't notice this had been posted I have the next one already waiting for me. SCORE!!!
JohnSpiritWolfalmost 12 years agoAs you said you can't please everybody all the time... I only pray you'll ignore the IDIOTS and keep doing the FANTASTIC job that you are doing... Some of us really appreciate that... And if it takes a little more time to do it that well, WE WILL BE ANXIOUSLY waiting... LOL's...
Bright Blessings to You & Yours...
JazCullenalmost 12 years agoand that's as far as I'm going with that LOL. I tried to feel sorry for her but alas like another reader commented, it was her wolf I felt really sorry for. One could almost accuse Delores of doing the cowardly thing by hiding behind her wolf who she knew wouldn't escape the encounter.
Lovely chapter, full of excitement and more insight into Adam's past. I am so looking forward to Adam and Bron getting together again and progressing their relationship.
Great job!!!
Gerrivalmost 12 years agoIt's getting so good! I love that you take your time to make it perfect ... I love all the tangents you have to make it more interesting..... I love that you make sure people are paying attention to the story and connecting the dots! Great job!
