Subservient One

This belonged in the "Stupid Shit" category. This was just violence for no rhyme or reason other than he's an asshole that belongs in prison. Ugly story.

1 star

I had D/s fantasies starting from childhood and most of my adult relationships involved D/s one form to another. That level depended on the woman. And while I've spanked, caned, used my belt, and slapped, the idea of this moron banging her head against the the table legs is appalling. There is nothing D/s about that, it's simply abuse. Now some girls get off and being scolded, etc, so I would do that with them a bit, but I would never call them stupid or worthless or some shit like that as this idiot in the story. The dirty talk was during sex and outside of that while we may have some light Dom/sub interaction I treated them with love and respect. This guy is simply abusive.

Second, one of the rules I would have is I can fuck other women when I wanted to. I would tell them this very early on in dating so if that was not cool with them they can end it and no harm done (first, second or third date the topic would come up). And while I would sometimes tease them about giving them to another man or even play it up. Like one gf I had blindfolded and kneeling in the living room I went and knocked on the door and opened it and told her a friend came in and was going to watch me fuck her, and maybe I'll let him fuck her. Not sure she completely bought it, but just the possibility made it exciting for her. But I'm pretty sure the guy in this story is closet gay or at least heavy bi. And pretty sure so is the author of this story. What man would want to see his woman with the jism of dozens of men in and on her and then want to fuck her after that. I'm totally for gay rights and all that, but the idea of another man's cock in my vicinity or his cum anywhere it can touch my body is unthinkable. There is no way I would be hard with that.

There is a fine line between a healthy D/s relationship and abuse, just like there is between making love and rape. They may involve a lot of the same acts, but the intention of the participants makes all the difference. Parts of this story is D/s and parts are simply abuse, so makes the whole thing abuse.

Is this writer capable of telling an erotic story?

Just stop now.

Please stop writing.