All Comments on 'Suspicion Ch. 14-15'

Skipped about 75% of this pro loser cuck crap to see if the MC grew a spine. And surprise surprise, nope.

A genuine question. Why didn't he divorce her? SHE did more damage to him than Karl. I know it's fiction but imo this is not a man anyone can look up to. Total loser. You are good at writing a pathetic man but damn, can you actually write about a man who isn't pathetic? We'll see. 2* because you wrote a story.

Seriously? This wasn't written by a woman? A MAN drug this out this long?

Rofl wow just stopped by to see how it ended, bullet dodged

Worthless trash!

FANTASTIC STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!! 5 stars!

I thought it was ok as a series. I understand that MC essentially takes the position that no matter what, he has to save the marriage and make it monogamous again. The main issue I have is that he has to work and plan incredibly hard to convince Kathy that their life together is worth more than the remnants of an adolescent infatuation. That’s a pretty tough sell as a premise. I preferred the original series because, well, it’s the likeliest scenario and one where insane planning isn’t necessary for even a pretty good marriage (and that’s being generous).

Didn't she pray and said the same thing to the same God many years back when they got married? If one day Karl gets better mentally and financially, I don't see how she doesn't cheat again.

10 Big Blazing stars for an EPIC Story, EPIC! I am sure Paul and Kathy live "Happily Ever After" though she is a POS Slimeball, slut, and whore. The only place Kathy deserves to be is in a whore house. Meredith is the one Paul should be spending his future with. Paul's actual wife is such a POS that she had an affair with an old BF and it took an elaborate plan to get her back. LOL, I hope he is happy as I would have kicked the slut to the curb after she completely lost Karl. Give her another dose of the "clap" on the way out the door. Anytime a wife ignores her vows or forgets her solemn marriage Vows and begins a sexual affair with another man only reveals her complete and total lack of Character, and without Character within, you can't trust her out of your sight. Thanks for the effort! Buster2U

I've heard that if an actor can make you hate their character, they're a good actor.

I ended up hating the wife, and since there's no actors involved, its all the writing.

Amazing how some authors can elicit such emotion.

good plot but disappointing ending

10 Big Blazing Stars for the Biggest burn on a slut wife and her lover that I have ever seen! LOL Perfect! Thanks for the Effort! Buster2U

As you turned off the voting I've only commented on this one.

Liked the plot, complex, interesting, and detailed.

The characters are quite good, the plot was far fetched but as a whole it’s a really good read.

Pretty disappointed with this because he should've divorced her or at least have his ongoing fling too

That was a looong slow burn…brilliant.

A good long slow story. Lots of subtle hints and red herring keeping the reader guessing what the ending would be.

To all of those who blindly say "He should have kicked her out", while those words do indeed roll easily off the tongue, they are actually a lot harder to do to someone you love.

All that work just to grow old with the hoe that gleefully cuckolded him.

Ah well, it's from the cuckolds are more noble group.

Shoulda known.