Sweet Surrender Ch. 03

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Barbara quirked an eyebrow at her and pursed her lips. She was as different from Emmie as day was from night. Skinny and drawn in the face, she looked as if she was the younger of the two instead of almost 10 years older. "I thought Cassie came up to tell you that we needed to leave in 15 minutes. I have to be at the caterers in 30 minutes and I'm not sure where it is."

"She did tell me, Barb, but you know what? I'm kinda of busy right now."

Barbara looked into the room and saw Luke standing by the bed, wearing nothing but a pair of jeans he had jerked on before Emily-Jane opened the door to reveal her grim reaper of a sister. He smiled and waved quickly. "I see," she murmured. "Well, perhaps I should ask someone else to take over your duties for the wedding."

Luke stepped back as Emmie exploded. "You know what? I don't give a shit. Get someone else to do it. I don't want to work for you anyway. I hate to tell you this, sister dear, but not everything in this fucking world revolves around your damn wedding. I hope you can just find someone who will put up with your shit as long as I have."

****TO BE CONTINUED. I am leaving it right here for now. I hope to have more soon but I can't guarantee anything. I have had another story idea strike and I'm going to try to get that out as fast as I can. Let me know how this part went. And thanks to everyone who is enjoying this series. I want to thank Cristal Ball for all her help with the editing. I really appreciate it ****

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EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69over 10 years ago
Oh snap!!!!

Shit is about to hit the fan with Barbie!!!

MrFAZAWMrFAZAWalmost 15 years ago
Great story!!!

I love your story I really relate to your Emmie. i like how you eluded to her emotional baggage, i did want to read better descriptions of her actual baggage but i'm a guy. all the praise you've recieved is great, your editing improved keep it up ... your story is so great i'm looking forward to seeing all the future details kids their jobs and family maybe a bit with cassie and tim ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Finish It Pls!!!

Personally as a BBW I've been very much happy to read this series..and hope you finish it really soon. Hopefully I will find the RIGHT military man for me, and no more of the WRONG military men!!!!!!

HURRY & FINISH THIS PLEASE!!!!

nichele27nichele27almost 15 years ago
More pleaseeeee

Please I need more of this story it makes me so happy to read which is stupid but it makes me believe I can find the military man of my dreams!

Dragonknight146Dragonknight146almost 15 years ago
great so far

im loving this story its really getting fun ^^v

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