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Click here"Well that's good, I guess. Sorry though about the money bro, and not ending up with a girlfriend."
Hamish told Darren the rest of what happened after he was done.
"HAHA, Well I can't say it was the smartest thing to do, but hey, if you think she was worth the 200 bucks, then hey."
"Bro, she is worth a billion. Good night."
The next morning Hamish showered and dressed, then walked into the living room, and up to the couch, pushing Darren onto the floor. "Wake up asshole, it's 9:30, I know we both have the day off but still."
"Yeah yeah, give me a minute."
"Get the mail would ya?"
"Sure." Darren grabbed the stack of envelopes from by the door, and walked over to Hamish in the kitchen and handed them to him. "Here, maybe you have an envelope of money and a key from your love goddess."
"Oh shut up dickhead, I know it ain't gonna be here." As Hamish began going through the stack he got to the bottom, and there was an envelope with rather nice and elegant handwriting that said, 'To Hamish, from Lindsey, I owe you this." Hamish held up the enveloped and said, "Hey check this out."
Darren leaned over to read it. "Well I'll be damned, it's your money."
"I guess so." Hamish opened the envelope and pulled out the wad of bills, and opened them up, and he just stared wide eyed at his hand, with his mouth gaped halfway open.
"What's that look for? What is it?"
"A key. A house key. HER house key."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoVery intriguing to say the least, superb detailing throughout and the 2 main characters story lines were very fitting especially the hard core "man hater gay/lesbian" who was hot. My nephew in Fla found one of those, a school teacher that sounded like the character, he worked though it got to her and after being married 10 years with 3 kids she looks the same 10 out of 10 Mrs Florida material.
Great style, very enjoyable read and you'll be very well liked here!!
Anonymousover 11 years agoand I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Papagriz
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI loved it really interisting plot n i would love to see a sequel. if not, it was good by itself.
Mystery_Mover 15 years agoAuthorOf course 'tis me, the author. Love all the comments. For this one I wasn't thinking a sequel, but it does lend itself to one, and I will write one. Might be a little while, but there will be a part 2.
Yes it indeed was pushing the limits of credibility, but I really have asked for a number, and had someone say that to me before. Afterall though, it IS a work of fiction. :)
As for the self proclaimed "carpet muncher" it's not a very lkely scenario and please don't feel that I think this is the way all lesbians are. It's not a theory, just something that gave the story a place to go, that isn't a common place you always see.
As for Lesbian as opposed to lesbian, it was a typo, sometimes I get ahead of myself.
Glad everyone liked this story. Now time to try and think of what kind of a subject to write next. Maybe I'll just post the only other story I've ever written(one I wrote after this and before the other one on here), that I actualy submitted for publication. It's more of a love story though, with detailed sex scenes.
One last thing, the banter between the main character and his buddy is pretty much how my and my friends male and female talk to each other. Very laid back and casual.
KOLKOREover 15 years agoWow! My anon friend said it so well (even if he/she did not know it)- fantasies are best located right were anon said this story's were: "at the edge of credibility". I like it. Close enough to reality to believe it MIGHT be possible, but somehow just unusual enough to run away from the mundain or the cliche'!<P>
Congrats on this short story - both well written and edgy. Very nice! <P>
Come back soon with another story ...
Anonymousover 15 years agoThe plot was very satisfying, although pushing the edge of credulity. But there were any number of errors, nothing huge, but irritating. E.G. why was 'Lesbian' capitalized? Is she from Lesbos? Other similar quirky things.
