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"Thank you," she said.
There was nothing more to say, then. The door creaked open slightly and she disappeared out of view.
Zhair'lo was in the middle of contemplating whether that had been, on balance, a good night or a bad one, when he heard a gruff voice interrogate someone in the hallway.
"All done in there, Mistress?"
There must have been, in addition to Deirdre, an Officer in the hallway. Why else would a man that age use that mode of address?
But no, it was Deirdre's small voice that answered.
"Yes."
"Good night then, Mistress."
With his door still open a crack, he saw a sliver of the man before the pounding on the door began.
"Zhair'lo M'han?" he called out.
"Ho," he replied, wondering what this could be.
"Get dressed and gather your things."
The door was pushed open and a large, beige knapsack was hurled into the room at the foot of his bed.
"What's this about?" he asked, pulling on his shorts.
"You applied to become a Fighter, didn't you?"
"Yes ..."
"We're here to bring you to the barracks."
With that, he pushed the door open and four very large men walked into his room.
"Let's get going, kid," one of them said.
- COMMENTS
xtorchabout 8 years agoAuthorJust noticed an anonymous email sent to me a while ago (I'm usually more punctual, honest!)
"Nap," he Zhair'lo entirely from his attention.
should read:
"Nap," he >dismissed< Zhair'lo entirely from his attention.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoYou continue to entertain with complex characters and a twisting epic plot.
Thanks!
JRT
kewlkievover 9 years agoIn all these years of being a literotica reader,have come across a lot of stories which were dazzling to some left at first lines.
This story is amongst the top Dias holders ,erotica mixed with a very astute and well thought off background and nuances,agreeing with other comments completed this in two days such was its line play and loved each aspect of talla and zharlo life.
Apologies for such long comment but please let the story unfold faster a month or so timespan becomes too much to wait for and sometimes it becomes a requirement to revisit old chapters just to get context back.
Looking forward to get dazzled with your work furthermore...
Anonymousover 9 years agoThese books are better than some of the published works I've read so far in my life and I am honestly dumbfounded at how well put together this story is. This is not at all what I would expect to find on a site like literotica. I love your works and want to ask if I could help edit your stories, I know three sets of eyes are better than two and have already seen some minor errors over the course of these books that could have been easily remedied if they'd simply been noticed. if you have any interest email me at kickbuhooki@gmail.com (before you judge me on that address, it's an account I made when I was 10 or so to sign up for flash game memberships, I started using it for junkmail a few years ago. If you email me I'll give you my actual email address, it's just a bad Idea to post that kind of thing on this kind of site).
homaridalmost 10 years agoThis has been an amazing story. Even though every page has something sexual I am more drawn in by the overarching story. This is definitely not your typical porn without plot here. I hope you keep it up.
