by Tx Tall Tales
Great story TX. We both love stories of this theme. Well written with great setup of scene and characters. Loooking forward to the boys finding those vandals and making them pay! ;-)
One of the better stories I have read online. My compliments to the author. It would be interesting to read more of this and other stories that you wright. Did they build or did they just ride off in the sunset? Did they come back to the cabin and resume their lifestyle there?
Little long for my taste but still a great story. Something I wouldn't mind happening to me one day
I cannot wait for the sequel. Hope you can work a way for Jill to figure as well.
I liked that one ! I just wish the next part was done ! Thanks .. can't wait
All that sharing without people showing that they were jealous of each other is hard to believe. Amazing. That tequila is evidently some real good stuff!
Great story, I know it's been a few years since you wrote this. I think a wife's' version would be good too, just like you've done in another one of your tales.
It's too bad there aren't two columns of stars for this one. It was well told, had some interest, intrigue, lots of sex, lots of lurid details, lots of 'taking it to the max,' and, well, lotsa lotsa.
This one kept be 'into it' from the start to the finish. I'm anxious to see if the sequel is there.
Fabulous story! It is quite plausible. The women were treated with respect, as equals. I loved this story. It passed the stiffie test, too, of course. Very sexy! Thanks for composing it.
when the blood comes back to my bigger head I will write sumpin better
What has that crap to do with loving wives??? Only stupid group sex shit with no brain in it!! And your fans acclaim to that brainless shit!!!
A little longer than I usually like, but my cock stayed hard with each page. Can't wait to read more of your stories.
It is plausible to an extent. We came close to this at our beach house, but the two wives only would go as far as handjobs. Reading thesis brought me back to thinking what may have been.
Im not usually into the wife sharing thing but you pulled that off very nicely. Thank you!
After all else it was the final scene (right before the vision) that get me off.
At one point I got a bit frustrated, that this is just another story confusing nudists and swingers, but then, a swinger sex story was pretty much what I expected it to be from the start, and it worked extremely well. Including the nudity part, and even clear road map to possibly much more relaxed casual nudism, so by the end I did forgive also the nudism monicker in the title.
Even more so, because I too believe that the "ideal" naturist attitude to be mostly fiction, at least in the form most never-nude people like it to imagine. Instead, my own ideal definition of nudism would be: social game rules doesn't change because of the state of disrobe. People that make you hard, will, pretty much irrespective their clothes anyway; it does become a bit more awkward when you can't hide that easily, but that doesn't give you any benefits.
Then, even that ideal is nearly unattainable in reality, at least I believe so personally.
But, just for an example of something very different:
I have voyeur/exhibitionist relationship (had? I never know will I see her ever again) with a neighbour girl for over thirty years (since both of us in preschool actually) and despite I have not seen her any other way that fully nude for many years it is still instant hard on to notice her. Then, that chance only exist for roughly three months a year, and is steady diminishing as time passes, due to clothed lives of both of us, that doesn't mix (because we decided so). And, of course that is never pre-planned, at least from my part (but there are clues and patterns, and technically, she's coming over to my site). Also, I have never touched her, and actually we even very rarely speak, because part of the game is to pretend that she don't notice a stranger (me) watching. Sometimes she show off her friends for me. Even few cases that I guess was pretty much first time nudity experiences in quasi-public setup. Of course, I remained invisible for anyone but her for those. I know how perverted that sounds. But nominally, that is non-sexual relationship by the classical standards, right?
Absurd bullshit?
. . . "after mom passed". . . ????? Passed what ? Passed gas? Passed first Grade? Passed her Driver's test???? The correct usage of the English Language requies an object for that verb (passed), numbskull!!!!
Men over 21 riding on motorcycle, foolish enough to carry their spouses behind them, no proper food or supplies, and I stopped reading when mom passed her last fart, because, I'm outta here.
Or, to plagarize the best commenter I have read in reading over 5000 stories here:
WHAT PLANET ARE YOU WRITING ABOUT?
I need to know because if my star cruiser ever visits there I will most definitely NOT disembark!!!
@anonymous
To say that someone passed is common usage in some areas of the USA to indicate that the person has died. Don't you remember implied subjects and objects? "Go home." is a complete sentence because the subject "You" is implied. In the example you cited, the implied object is "on to her reward.", or "over to the other side".
It's just a euphemism, like so many others, to avoid saying, "She died."
Never gave this story a chance till now, exceptional story with suspense. Didn't expect it to turn the way it did. I love the fact that it has some realism to it when the characters act out. You always make me think how a movie would be like. Lastly, my wife always gets a reward everytime I've read any of your stories.THANK YOU!!!
Understood that it is sheer fantasy; it mostly was believable, and fun.
A LOT of people ruin their lives, trying to even win at Monte Carlo, or any other casino. Same for open marriage sex. Sooner or later, you lose. Mostly sooner.
Jill and Jack are divorced within a year. Robin and Dan last until Dan discovers that he is not the biological father of Robin's first child, Alex is. Sheri tries to even the score, getting pregnant from Dan, and in the failed process learning that she cannot have children. Robin decides that she should give Alex the children that Sheri can't, with Dan fucking Sheri while Robin and Alex start creating a family. Eventually Alex and Robin decide to make it permanent, divorcing Sheri and Dan, who start a spouse swapping club at the lake property. Alex and Robin have a good marriage, until Robin discovers that Alex and Jill have been having an affair for years, and that Alex is also fucking Sheri whenever they can hook up. Dan eventually comes out of the closet and runs off to San Francisco with a guy he met at their spouse swapping club. Sheri never married Dan so she just becomes the blow job queen around town. Jill fades away and Alex and Robin limp along in a failed marriage until the children are grown and gone. In their old age they are all alone, and bitter. They end up realizing that their weekend at the lake was the beginning of their ends.
Was the story published where you and Dan caught up with the vandals Thanks in advance
One of the hottest stories ever. No kidding. Every man's fantasy come true. You can really write erotic scenes. Easily a 5. 😊😊😊😊😊
I found your story both erotic and beautiful. I'm hoping to find the right group to have this paradise in my life. It could be just a dream, but a man's gotta dream!
My wife and plan to read your story together after the kids are in bed later.
This story was really well written. It appeals to all outdoors enthusiasts and the freedom of having great friends to share each other in a way very few can deal with. I hope for more writings and stories.
Very well written story. One of the best, if not the best, that I've read here. Good intro, good flow, good everything. Well done!
This is the first comment I’ve ever left. I have loved all your stories and when I saw the Monty Python reference, I knew I had to say something. I hope you continue to add to this library. I really appreciate the character development and background. Please keep writing!!
This was a great story. I am not a "reader" but this story kept me intetested and was a truly awesome writing!
well written, easy to stay engaged and realistic. excellent my friend
One of the best stories I've read here. Great.
If they had been sisters and they, therefore, brothers-in-law, it would have already made me died of pleasure. But that is a personal matter.
Excellent. Five stars, of course.
Love all tour work this one did not disappoint. Hope you continue the tale. Like to head about the cabin expansion and all.
Was so wonderfully worn out from reading! lol Great story of comfort!
Nice fantasy , you'd have to be pretty good friends and very open minded
Except nobody sampled the freshly flavored pussies. What a waste!
You did a great job of describing each charter with great detail. I could visualize the story as I read it. In no time at all I was drawn into the story.. Wanting to see what happens next.. I hope to see more stories from you.
I had to quit at page 6.
Too much wife swapping for me to tolerate.
Messing around was stretching my limits but total swapping I could not handle.
If my wife did that I would suicide rather than face her again.
It would literally kill me.
Bill
Those girls tasted each other on the cocks of the guys. Hot. Hot. Hot.
Loved the imagery , not just the sex, but the scenery too.
You write beautifully. Please share more with us!
I totally love the idea of sharing like that. And being secluded at a small bach with just the basics is the best way to get away from the rat race. Great story again, where do you get the ideas from?
Not a fan of sharing, or cheating (whatever you want to call it), BUT, if you consider the circumstances HONESTLY, and consider each member of the group, it IS extremely believable, and I wouldn't be such a pinch-faced panty-waste to think I couldn't get past it. But that's why I'm an old guy, with a lot of life experiences. I get it. Times change, and people change. You can't get in the way. Loved it, Tx. Gimme more!
Thoroughly enjoyable read. Reminds me of a friend whose family owned a similar setup on the lake. We all had some fun times there.
Keep on writing!
Would have liked to have seen the girls look for the guys to get into some MM action as well.
Well written and feasible. Made me rock hard and wishing it was there to experience it.
Loved the story and well written It’s a story that entices the imagination.
It was just OK for me. I have enjoyed the stories that I’ve read from you previously, particularly The Perfect Game, but this one didn’t quite do it for me.
The flow between the early part of the story where there was no sex, to the separate “swap encounters” to, ultimately, the group session seemed off. Maybe I wanted more from the group session. I think I was looking for a final session at the end of the story as well. Although perhaps how you wrote it was more realistic. Hard to say.
I think what bothered me the most was the trite dialogue and cliché expressions from all the characters. It got tiresome after a while.
I love extended build ups and character introductions where there’s no sex. I think because, as with any story, you get to know the characters first. With this one I found myself going back and trying to remind myself, “so who is married to whom? I never really felt like I knew the characters.
Anyway, certainly not a bad story, just not your best. Obviously I’m in the minority as most people here seem to love it. And I will certainly continue to read your other stories. You are a good writer.
Group sex, not a real turn on or turn off, guess I'm old fashioned. One partner and some privacy concentrating on each others pleasure. The story was good and a bit tritylating but pretty much a fantasy although I'm sure wife swapping goes on. Marathon sex may sound great but most men are one and done for the night. Good writing as usual and of course accolades to the editors and other helpers
Absolutely wonderful story. Love the storytelling, love the sex scenes - love the chemistry!
I keep returning to this story and I love it. I think you’re a little in love with Robin, and that makes it so much more special. What a great character she is. You can tell how much you cherish her. So amazing that you found a way to both keep your own happy marriage, and love Robin, too.
It’s swell to be considered educated for recognizing a Monty Python lyric.
The marathon ‘round Robin was engaging too.
like the story need more of it and what happen to jack and jill in story did they rejoint or split up
I have read this story twice and cant get enough of it. It had a great story line and definitely awesome sex. Just the lead up to everything that happened was amazing. The touching on the first day to the full blown sex sceenes.. Man I wish I was there. Love how erotic and sexy the story became, with all the fingering and touching and then the fucking. Thanks for such a good read.
I originally read you story in it's illustrated version on the now defunct Illustrated Love Stories web site. I still have a copy of that version I was able to download before the site closed. I guess my situation is something like seeing the movie before reading the book and it was a great experience. You see, unlike other readers, I have a mental vision of what the character might actually look like. That, plus a storyline that's a lot more fleshed out, wow, what a great read. I loved the illustrated story and now I love the original even more. Many thanks.
I liked this story very much. It's not designed to provoke a quick wank, but it reminds me of scenes many years ago that were a bit like this without the open sex. My mind goes back to the party-in-the-sauna days when several of us very clearly would have done this if we could, and privately we even told each other so. But in the real world, somebody always gets hurt, and we were all old enough to know that. Alas.
Wow1 What a story! So real and life-like. My husband WILL take the time to read this as we play!! Great characters, great setting, great mood! Well done!
Lost the count of times I've read this story and still keep coming back. The best on Literotica!
Well written, plausible story. I believe that the easiest way to spot an idiot is to see if he is OK with being a cuck or thinks swinging is enhancing his life. Therefore this is a well written story about idiots written for idiots.
Very well written engaging story which I am sure entranced all readers. So much fun was had by all and the narrative allowed the reader to some extent join in. Great writing and story line.
Excellent piece of writing getting a great balance into a delicate relationship situation. Highly erotic and we'd all love to be part of it. No idiots, no cucks, just a few couples giving and taking pleasure from each other. Thanks
This was the second story I read on literotica and it easily is still one of my top three. Thank you TTT for that.
I must have come back to read this entire story through again at least four times. Sure, the sex and the situation are hot and compelling, but I realized by the third or fourth time through it that I just simply like these people! In the final scene, Robin muses about what she'd like to see happen in the future on the property. How about it, TTT? Make that sequel happen!
Tex I have read this story at least 6 or 8 times, it never get"s old!
Dave
Wonderful! The feelings by both sexes were described in such detail. The emotions and the physical sensitivities were presented in such passion.
It's been a long time since I've read this last, and it's still as good as the first time.
I have to go back to Tex's other offerings and see if they ever get together again.
I have a feeling Jill wanted her ass pummeled.
And of course I have to see the story of the vandals being caught.
Great job buddy, besides the few editing misses, this was a great story.
Mffdvrr
So I realized that since I can't log in on my phone for some reason anymore, I usually sign comments with my pen name. And I left my comment on this awesome story and signed it "mffdvrr"
Ooops, wrong smut oriented website! Sorry
Yarnspinnerr ;->
Very sexy story. I like it. Even if there was no sex, I’d enjoy this cabin for the nude lifestyle. Like she said at the end, family, friends, grandparents, grandchildren all being naked without a care in the world. But add in the sex, then it’s out of this world.
Phew---still smiling. Came close in real life a few times, but we all stopped before the "fit hit the shan". Would like a few more weekends at the cabin from you. Thanks.
Excellent story! Would like to know if there is a place like that for real. I love how they teased and knew that it all stayed at the cabin.
i wonder if i would enjoy watching my wife do those things. i am pretty sure i would love it.
When I was in my 20s my bf at the time we when to his friends cabin. There was 4 couples plus us. We were all staying for a week there. The first night was normal drinking and smoking weed. The next day at on the boat the girls were sunbathing one of the guys throw water on us we jump up without r binkni tops on . The guys said after thar we have now all see ur tits keep the tops off. We did after abit. We stay that way even at the cabin. Then we told the guys since u seen ur tits we like to see ur cocks. The guys had no problem with that. 2 of the guys were huge long and thick. The others were good size. We started playing truth or dare. Let's say it got wild . I had alot of first that week. First time with a black guy first time with a girl first 3 way first dp ( anal &pussy). It was a great time. We play with the others after for about 6 months then 2 of the girls got knock up by the same guy who was not there man.
2nd reading 5 years later and hasn’t lost any allure or enjoyment, a 5 the first time and a 5 the second.
I read most of this story the first time then couldn't find . but this time I had to read it all the way through. Loved the content the expressions and the whole subject matter. Well written and read like a warm breeze blowing thru the cabin , nipples getting excited with the soft actress. Bravo and encore please. Thank you