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Click here"Okay, if you were a baby..." I began. "...And your mom was walking around with these..." I gave one of her breasts an affectionate squeeze. "...And then she fed you from a bottle, wouldn't you feel cheated?"
"I mean I'm a grown up and I just want to suck on them every time I see them; even when you've got your clothes on."
"That's your job to suck on them," she smiled. "But it's also why we couldn't keep Angela's baby. There just wouldn't have been enough to go around."
"I don't know," I said. "They're pretty big."
"Yeah," she smirked. "But there are only two of them. So with you sucking on one and him sucking on the other, what would OUR baby do?"
I slammed on the brakes. My Mustang's six piston Brembo brakes brought us to a stop so quickly that we were both snapped back by our seat belts."
"We're having a baby," I said in shock. "US! as in, you and me."
"That's the only US I know," she smiled. "Why did you think I've been setting up a nursery?"
The end
lots of drama. Some of the characters were borderline over-the-top caricatures, Angela was too loopy and Tanya too compassionate but it was still a fun and enjoyable story.
I find you to be a consistent writer for this type of story. I believe I have enjoyed every one of your stories, maybe only one or two I wasn't keen on.
Thanks for sharing your talent.
Almost every time you do a BTB story you make the male lead a complete a-hole. It really takes a lot of the enjoyment out of the story because I don't think most people can relate to that. It's like a trope with your writing, the same as with the cheating wives in these stories - they're almost always either sluts from birth, or mentally incompetent (or both). It's just laid on a little thick - like this story could have totally worked with Angela just being manipulated by "Jerry" right up until the end. Hell, it might have been a better story in a lot of ways - Like she finds out the baby is his and goes to him in frustration and convinces herself that he loves her and he smooth talks her into helping him escape... and then the story ends just as it did normally (except maybe without the unnecessary roadside execution). I know you don't read these comments anymore, but I think you dehumanize the cheating wives too much which kills a bit of the suspension of the story.
Stang's cheating wives never use contraception or it somehow goes wrong and they get pregnant. Is that realistic? Just curious.
5 Stars even though They would need a minimum of 7 officers to patrol . Sick cops and vacations make that the Min and 9 the max .
4 cops in town 2 on patrol and 2 in the office all the time. That means they each work 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Just a but if a problem there. Otherwise, it was an ok story.
good story, dialogue, dumb bitche's
reasons and of course, Tanya. just too long by a few pages, but I read it all and thanks for your effort.
SS06, you have a future in comedy!
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As for me, I'm still trying to figure out this sentence (a direct quote) from the story's 2nd paragraph...
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"It's small enough that almost everyone here knows someone who knows everybody else, but big enough that no one knows everybody by name."
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I think I've figured out what SS06 intended to say with those words, but I just can't figure out how to make them actually say what he surely must have probably meant to say.
Anyway, I do appreciate humor!
I have seen a lot of muscle cars and none were Japanese . 5 Stars on a Very good Story . You ,Todd and JPB and saddletramp are the best here for Me .
Good story but I gotta wonder why the author just quit posting and disappeared off the radar?