- Loving Wives
- The Doctor
- Page 2
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I knew she was my ex-wife.
I asked the charge nurse if the tox screen was back up from the lab. The nurse read me the numbers. My patient was so loaded with heroin I knew that she probably wouldn't survive recovery and withdrawal, if she made it off my table.
Without delay I made a terrible decision.
I nicked one of her arteries with my scalpel.
Silently I said, "Goodbye Ivette. I once loved you and still care.
Maybe now all your pain will go away."
The heart monitor near her head started complaining.
Then she flat lined.
- COMMENTS
GrumpyGambyover 12 years agoI find myself wondering what was the point of this story? The cold and dispassionate way in which it was told obviously lends itself to a retribution focus. If, however, that was the focus, what was the point in going through his second marriage?
I think it would have been better if you had allowed him some emotion, then had him choke it back down and repress it.
You sure do like to kill off your characters!
zed0over 12 years agoStory seemed a little rushed, more like a narrative than a story. But all in all a good read.
