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Click here"I wish that were true. At least then I'd know why." he said sadly.
"I don't care any more. I've got you back where you belong ... with me."
He placed his fingertips on her cheek and stroked it very gently. "Don't you think I should be punished for my sin?" he asked with a straight face.
"I don't know. What kind of punishment would be appropriate?"
"You could make me your slave. I would have to wait on you ... hand and foot."
"Hmmm ... not bad ... but then ... you're going to do that anyway, aren't you?" she laughed.
"I suppose so." he laughed back at her.
"That reminds me." he said, quickly propping himself up on one elbow. "What are you doing tomorrow?"
"The usual. Trying to sell houses. Why?" she asked with a quizzical look.
"I thought I might find out about your taste in engagement rings. I guy can't ask his girl to marry him if he hasn't got a ring can he?" he grinned.
Her mouth dropped open and her eyes got bigger; all in the space of a second. "Jack ... we've just gotten back together ... this is kind of sudden isn't it?"
He shook his head. "I was looking at rings at the mall the other day and it struck me that I didn't have a clue what you would like. This isn't some afterthought or spur-of-the-moment thing, Donna. When I said I loved you, it meant that I was going to ask you to marry me. I was going to commit myself to you. Then ... well ... everything went to hell. Now, I just want us to get back to where we were. Somehow ... just get back to there."
"Jack ... Jack ... you already know I love you. If you want to marry some old babe like me ... well ... who am I to say no." she smiled.
"I want that more than anything. So ... when I find a ring and I get down on my knee and I ask Donna Louise Remple if she will be my bride ... what do you think she'll say?"
"I know for sure she'll say yes. You can count on it." she smiled.
"Then the sooner I get the ring, the sooner we have the wedding?" he asked.
"Whatever you want, lover. As long as I'm with you ... it doesn't matter." She put her hand to his face and cupped his jaw gently. "Do you think we can celebrate a little early?"
"I didn't take my little blue pill tonight." he said with regret.
"Why don't we see if I can help things along." she volunteered.
And she did.
- COMMENTS
Rancher46over 3 years agoShe has a big forgiving heart and the fact she would forgive him made for a good ending. I don't usually go along with forgiveness of a cheat, but the way his consentience got the best of him I would say like she said it was out of character for him. I guess everyone deserves a second chance and with what he did trying to make it right I guess he did truly deserve a second chance. Well done Coaster 5 stars
Anonymousover 4 years agoI was hoping she’d dump him. He said he loved her with all his heart. B.S. If that were true, he wouldn’t have cheated, certainly not that easily. Then she said that his classmate’s seduction of him is payback for his seduction of her. Huh? That makes absolutely no sense.
KarenEover 9 years ago"Then you left and I was alone again. Just when I thought that those days were over, I was alone again. You can't know how that hurt, Jack."
Huh? She TOLD him to go, now she's upset that he left and she was alone again?
KarenEalmost 10 years agoI realize it would kill the story, but why wouldn't he take the woman he loves home with him for his father's memorial service?
bigguy323over 12 years agox
Anonymousover 12 years agoAn excellent story. Fascinating though that if the roles had been reversed and Donna had cheated on Jack there would be fifty comments, at least forty of which would be screaming "once a cheater always a cheater," defaming Coaster2's manhood, and complaining because she wasn't humiliated before her family and friends and driven into abject poverty.
charleybearabout 16 years agobut better late than never. I thought when I was reading that it had similarities to a story I had previously read and after I finished it I looked at Foul Language and remembered it totally. This was a very romantic story with the bit of infidelity to jangle the nerves a bit and I really liked it. Sometimes I think us men are a bit dull, doing things we know would hurt someone but not looking back anyway. Yes a bit dull. Thank you for your story. I will continue to look for more. Charley
bornagainover 16 years agoDonna has alot of heart and love in her to take Jack back like that.
Anonymousover 16 years agoI enjoyed the story as a whole very much. I don't think the hero ever really explained his one night stand. I guess we all do crazy things like that without every understanding our motivation.
Boyd
