The Haunting in Hollow Brooke

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We ran down the stairs and yelled to everyone. "Fire! Everyone get out! Now!"

We grabbed two random coats as we ran out the front door. When we got half way down the drive way we turned around. There were flames already coming out of the roof and we could see the old woman and man standing in the doorway. Through the crackling of flame you could hear their eerie laughter.

The entire house burnt down. The Sherman's did not make it out. I guess that old man and his wife were trying to claim some more victims, even long after their deaths. The police began their investigation into the fire. Sissy and I were both worried that the fire, and the destruction it caused would be traced back to the nude siblings who were upstairs alone. However, their investigation came to a much more chilling conclusion. The cops concluded it was the basement furnace that started it. The bizarre thing about it is that the furnace was covered up after Davis died. As you can imagine this was a big relief for Sissy and I. Things between us are fantastic, and full of even more sexual tension and desire. I catch her giving me flirtatious winks at the dinner table. Sometimes she even rubs her foot against my crotch while the family eats, as I try not to squirm. As for our next adventure together, I suppose you'll have to wait until next Halloween to see what happens.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
deserves a negative vote

not good at all i don't think you even tried. IF you want to improve, which i doubt you do, ignore the rave reviews and listen only to the complaints that is the only way you will improve.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
got to laugh at that ass pervy

pervy is such an ass he is just as anonymous as everybody else there is no phone book in the world where you will find MRPERVY. he just wants everybody to have the same opinion as him ( one sided and unrealistic ) such a big ego surprised he can work a computer. as to the story way to long and not very good needs a lot of work.

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchalmost 11 years ago
who ya gonna call?

I fail to see the haunted part, except for perhaps the end, which doesn't really count. I do like the title. This is what I tend to refer to as a semi -incest story. The sex is buried so deeply into the narrative that it doesn't really make it a sex story. It's good if you don't take it as an erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Identical twins?

Identical twins can only ever be the same sex, not brother/sister - that would make just them fraternal - look it up.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice

Very good and just right for Halloween.

turner1116turner1116over 11 years agoAuthor
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE VOTE VOTE VOTE...THANK YOU EVERYONE!!!

Thanks to all of you who have left me comments! Much appreciated! Please everyone, every little vote counts...Please continue to vote. Thank You, Thank You, Thank You! :)

RecHikerRecHikerover 11 years ago
Interesting story

This story is just in time to October and thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good Entry

I liked the story but it seemed a bit rushed at the end. Good start though, you could continue with these two characters.

Gebob69Gebob69over 11 years ago
OUTSTANDING RATED A 5....

You have started very well with the backgound on the manison. More background on the characters is a must if you continue this story. I know the manison is the main focal point and it still can be even in ruins it can cause strange happenings.

Please continue there is a lot of plot lines that are open to explore.

turner1116turner1116over 11 years agoAuthor
Please everyone continue to....Vote Vote Vote :).......THANK YOU!!

Thank you Mark! ;)......

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