All Comments on 'The Hell in Your Eyes Ch. 09'

Missed you girl!

Lol i asked this same question a year ago...TM answered it! Jack meant say yes to coming and living with him.

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P.S. - Bon appetit!

This story is so well written, very erotic! Put us all out of our collective misery and give us the next installment! All I can say is BRAVO!!!

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Finally caught up and what an amazing story it is! Glad the author leaves updates on her bio and not just dissapears like I've seen some do *cough* keep up the good work! Also the reason I haven't been able to finish reading it in one sitting it that I keep getting.. Distracted.. Deliciously distracted

Where do I start? This is my 10th time rereading this story and it is just as good as the first time. Your characters are carefully and beautifully developed and the plot is so intricately woven and crafted, that I hang on to each and every last word.. This story is hands down one of the BEST I have ever read. I longingly hope and pray that I will come online and see the next chapter and the world can finally turn again but until then, I will read it for the 11th and 12th time.

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Just offering some encouragement to finish this awesome story!!!!! Put us out of our misery......please :)

When will you provide the 10th chapter ?

Please finish your so very nice story !

You're killing me, TM. ;-;

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When will there be more?

I have read this story 8 times now, and read some other stories of yours which are great. But this one is amazing, it shows your writing talent and experience. Please post the 10th chapter soon. Till then I'll keep reading and keep waiting :)

Please update. I am one of your fans that faithfully checks in once a to see if you've updated.

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Wtf this is gonna drive me crazy! Please update!! Don't do this to us!!

Could you at least tell us so we are not constantly disappointed when we check this page?

I'm thinking about breaking up the last chapter into pieces so that you guys can get a little relief from waiting. I posted about it a little on my profile. - T.M.

Hey - thank you so much for your quick note. I for one would happy with any scrap of this story, so feel free to post in parts rather than one big chapter. Here's hoping we're lucky enough to get more soon :)

I personally love long chapters but don't have an opinion either way. Just glad you have returned and thrilled you are finishing the story. Happy either way.

I want that ending any way you give it! Finally catharsis!! Hey you could publish it! Dark indie books are all the rage now :-)

Which and When. EMAIL 11b4prmh@comcast.net

New chapter. I decided to break the ending into pieces so that the wait is shorter. I'm editing it right now. I'll post it within the next day, or so.. then it'll take about a day for the editor's to approve it, but it'll be up this week. - T.M.

and cannot wait for ch. 10!

Have been waiting!!!! Love your writing

Chapter 10 to the Hell in Your Eyes has been uploaded. It should post within the next day or so.

What happened to the new chapter?

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It's still pending, and waiting on approval. When you upload on Saturdays sometimes things don't post until Monday night. It should be up around midnight. It's all on the web master now.

Stop that moon counting, lol.

Just waiting...😉

I don't think here is a chapter 10. The author is perfectly named - it's truly twisted to not put us out of our misery. Game set and match - to our favourite author

I know I haven't posted in over a year, but they usually only take a day or so to approve things. I uploaded Chapter 10 on October first. It should be up by now, unless they have completely changed the way that they do things. If it doesn't post by tomorrow night, I'm going to message them to find out what's going on. - T.M.

Now if only some of this author's dedication could magically float on over to Hispet21 and get them to resurface everything would be perfect.

Did the next chapter get approval now?😢😢😢

It's been Eighty Four Thousand Years!!!

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I dont think Ill ever get to read chapter 10...😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

OMG!!! Please, please, please finish it! I have to know what happens! We all do. One of the best stories ever! Love it. :)

I keep coming back to read this series. I’ve been coming back for more than five years

It's truly an amazing story.

I hope you'll come back to complete it one day.

What an ending to the chapter, very good