The Night of the Party Ch. 01

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'Wait Nance' I pleaded.

She paused near the door for just a second without turning around before rushing from the room...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
???

What did he expect? He took advantage of her on purpose. He's a whore and scum of the earth...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
a one star

for the make her drunk plan ,

RecHikerRecHikerover 11 years ago
Great Chapter - There is a difference in twins!

I loved this chapter and now I'm going to go read chapter 2. The author paid extra attention to the details which are important. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

To set the record straight the anonymous poster below is wrong. Nightlight00 was correct to point out that Robbie and Nancy were not identical twins.

Identical, or monozygotic, twins develop from a single egg/sperm combination that splits a few days after conception. Their DNA originates from a single source, thus their genetic makeup is the same and the characteristics that are determined by genetics will be similar. Identical twins are always of the same gender, except in extremely rare cases of chromosomal defect.

Fraternal, or dizygotic, multiples form when two separate eggs are fertilized by separate sperm in a single ovulation cycle. They are no more alike than any sibling set, sharing about 50% of their genetic markers in a unique combination of genes from both parents.

Just want to set the record straight. Good job Nightlight00

RecHiker

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
Fantastic storyline

I hope that he can convince Nancy that being with him is the best thing that could ever happen to her.

Thanks for the read

kaidmankaidmanalmost 12 years ago
great start

you have the makings of a great story please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
WTF

Please do not stop now...............

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Twins

Did you really have to tell us the twins aren't identical? What do you think "identical" means? Think: If they were identical, they'd be two girls or two boys. (And two girls or two boys _can_ still be fraternal instead of identical.).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Good story. Please continue and fuck the haters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Now that you've started

You had to get her drunk to fuck her? Maybe she didn't really want it that way! Maybe all you had to do was be honest and tell how you felt, then she wouldn't be mad at you.

Now you must write more chapters,explaining how you calmed her down, then convinced her to feel the same towards you as you feel about her. And please make it good!

dutch513dutch513almost 12 years ago

story is very good for first time ,keep writing and you will get better get someone to prof read it will help . good luck dutch513

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