All Comments on 'The Photo Ch. 02'

Sorry you didn't finish this, it sounded good. Maybe some.one else can pick it up.

You are a cunt. Not only do you write like shite, you can’t finish your pathetic stories. I think you’re a closet cuck. SGawWY

sad there's no update. aw well. looks like the wife is in deep shit.....cheating or no cheating.

Pls continue

You got my attention. please finish the story. The BBQ was a rough surprise. now what?

But thankfully, not much of it.....

The outgoing and never returned... I hope you took the slut with you.

Finish it

Don’t piss off readers by dribbling out the story.

Ending?

1/5 for unfinished story

Jack meoff and Jill meoff

2 stars for leaving the story hanging. It had potential...

Glad everyone could overlook how stupid this actually got in this part.

It's a shame it was never finished.

Where is chapter 3?

I was going to bitch about where was chapter # 3 when I went back to look at the date of submission (2007), so guess no sense going in that direction. Shame on you.....liked the story (to that point), but only 1 * now.

I think it a tad unfair to slag the author off as it was 2007 when he wrote this.....his last enty. His bio tell you he was 60. The details were modified in 2009 but what if that wasn't him but someone dealing with his estate? He would be at least 72 now, so lets ease up on slagging him off. Maybe someone could finish this..... @saddletramp ??

I'd like to team up with someone to write the final chapter

Takers on finishing the story? I would if I could tell a decent tale.

What a crock, another unfinished story.

Poor grammer, unbelievable plot, poor editing, no character development, unfinished. I'd rate it a minus if it were available.

detroitdave

IT SUCKS AGAIN> THIS GUY IS A PERFECT 0 AS AN AUTHOR. 0*'s

Why didn’t you finish the story? The phono pt 2

It fucking sucks because i wasted my time reading something this fuckhead had not finished, and like a lot of these writers, never will. What a fucking waste. He could at least told use it was unfinished.

literotica needs a banning function to remove authors who leave stories unfinished.

Crappy come on. Author rating goes to zero for failure to follow up. Hope you are better at sex.

Poor Rick, two idiots threaten him with torture. Sounds like jail for Jack and Bill if Rick can get out of there. Worst idea since decaf ........

Did you commentators ever stop to think that the author died? Had a stroke? Was jailed? Suffered a grievous injury? Got tired of negative comments? Look at the dates! These were his last two submissions. Perhaps he continued on another site. You'd make awful jurors for an innocent person on trial. Grow up crybabies!!

What a dick for not finishing the story

It's been 15 years since we were advised to stay tuned. Low marks for incomplete work.

Ed

Terrible. Shame on Literotica for allowing it to be published.

Unpardonable sin.

FTDS. Very bad form

I agree it's a shame this was left hanging.

But holy shit, what an awesome start!

Too bad neither Incoming nor FTDS took a swing at it.

1 star - FTDS

Ohhh maaannn, we need more!

Yes, I would have liked to see the rest of the story….

That being said, this is the last story published by this author and is dated 2007….

Who knows what has happened to him/her?

Could have died, gotten sick, or just plain gave up writing…

It is what it is…too bad…

what the hell happened next?

Awesome ending!