All Comments on 'Traitor's Daughter Ch. 04'

This is a well done story that I hope to continue reading! Please put out Chapter 5!

Just retread the series and fell in love with it all over again. Please keep going! I refresh weekly in hopes of seeing a new submission. Your words and character descriptions are amazing, and I am undoubtably hooked!

How can this be it?! After that shower scene?!! So cruel to leave us hanging like this, how can I convince you to post more? Candy? Cookies? A paddle? I want to know more about all of them, and I definitely want to hear more about what happened to Dmitry that traumatized him so badly! Oh, and more of him and Alex, yes please, pretty please! ^_^

Sorry if this is a spoiler so you may not want to read any further

Has no one noticed the name of Dmitrys driver

You know named her after him.....'below him' ......only prob why would he just not kill Dmitry after he did that to his daughter? He was in the car with him when he hit her and when he took her to the clinic!!!!

Love Manual Ferrera ...not sure she could ever take his finger activities, but especially not after a brutal rape

Pls update. I love this story so much and I'm dying fior another chapter.

thank you for writing this story. I have read it 6 times and it just gets better every time I read it. It is sexy it is scary it's provocative. Even if you don't continue this story I really wish you would write something else. You have a great imagination and a flair for language. Good luck.

After that short piece of "evidence" that she is indeed still writing, where is the next chapter? Or at least another update? If she doesn't want to continue that's fine, but at the very least send an update saying "will not continue, stop waiting for updates". I hardly think that is too much to ask for.

This chapter is by far one if my favorites read on this site! To hear Lexi talk about her upbringing after being separated from her mom and explaining why she got his name tatted on her..oh em gee, phenomenal! Excited to read more!

@Halsmam, yes, I noticed the connection of Lexi to Alexadr (or h/e its spelled) from Ch. 2.. I had to go back to verify that that was one of the minor characters names!

Hi All,

I'm sorry I haven't updated in awhile but work has been insanely busy and I'm beyond exhausted when I finally get home. I'm still working on TD5 and I'm hoping to be able to set aside some writing time this weekend. I'm sorry the chapters are so far apart and that the wait has been so long. Good news is...that TD5 is already longer than TD4 and it's still not finished. There is a really in depth look into Dmitry and his POV in this chapter. Very excited!!!

I will check in soon :)

Hi All,

Just wanted to let u all know that I was able to clear my schedule for this Saturday....just to write. I'm hoping, if all goes well, to be finished. - thanks for reading - Tatum

Just the update i was hoping for :-)

Hope you have a wonderfully productive weekend... xoxo

Really glad to hear it.

Get it to your editor pronto so we can all share :-)

ok...i officially look like a stalker. I keep peeking every couple of hours hoping you will let us know an eta for pt5. Please give me a hint so I am not lying awake all night peeking at my tablet for an update. xoxo -Maliceon (huge fan of the story)

Please can you let us know if the next instalment is coming soon?

What others have said... ETA CH. 5?

Oooh, I love this story! Please write more soon!!!

This story - is... extraordinary, emotional and captivating in so many ways... Thank you so much for sharing this - and please, please, please keep writing...

like everyone are saying i'm craving for more of this! please continue to write more of your story! we all love ur story!!

Not to rush genius, but this was one of the first quality stories I read on this site, so I'm really looking forward to the next part! I gave up for a little while, but after seeing the comment that you were writing more I got really excited!!!

One of the best stories I've read on this site. A very big thank you for your talented story telling and time. Always disappointed to realize there are still chapters yet to be written. I really hope you will update us soon as to whether it's worth our time to invest in a story. ...

nearly 9 months since last chapter was added , one can only hope the Author will continue what is a most Remarkable story.

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

Hello my beautiful readers!!! I should say, "beautiful readers that I continue to disappoint and neglect. I'm sorry the Chapter hasn't been submitted yet When you work for the largest healthcare system in your state and you find out Ebola is coming to town...any extra time outside of work and family becomes forfeit. Now that the patient panic and frustration has settled I am back to work on finishing up TD5. At this point it's just rereading and attempting to prefect each sentence before I send it to my amazing editor. Once again sorry for the delay....if I could just quit my jobs and write all day....I can only dream. Will let you all know if I don't get it to my editor by Wednesday. - thanks for reading! - Tatum

P.S.

I do feel the need to remind everyone that I write Non-consent so be prepared for TD5.

One of the best stories I've read! Loved it. Thank you for sharing.

Ebola?! Oh, no! Okay, forgiveness for lack of updates granted. ;) Good luck! I'm super excited for the next chapter!

Hey All,

Ebola Schmola! We have the best bio-containment unit in the US. Hope I didn't just jinx my state. Eeek. But thank you for your concern. At first there was a huge panic but things seem to be ok now. :) Just on-call constantly.

I will need another day to finish up before sending TD5 to my wonderful amazing editor. I tend to be a little wordy so I am trying to trim the fat. :) Should be good to go by tomorrow evening. Thanks for reading. - Tatum

Holding my breath for the next chapter!!!

Yippie....looking forward to seeing the next chapter!

Can't wait! thanks for the update! xxx

Hate that that Pesky thing called LIFE has kept you from writing more chapters. Love this story and I have been craving to read a new chapter.

This story is in my favorites for a reason. Keep up the good writing and don't let the A-holes get to you.

So excited I really like this story

Where is chapter 5! This is the best Russian romance I've read so far. Please hurry up.

I just want to read chapter 5 already! It doesn't have to be perfectly refined :)

You dont say it will come out the next day. And then go hermit after a week without the next story or an update.

I agree. People shouldn't promise something they aren't sure they can deliver. You said so many times it was almost complete...

Please, for the sake of my sanity, post the next chapter already!

More please! I am so thankful that i have chanced upon talented authors and great reads on this site...and it isnt all about sex lol I really hope you add to this soon

I'm sure that ownedbyconway will publish a chapter one day. However, I really do hate it when authors promise something in a few days and don't deliver too! I'll rather that authors don't make such vague promises over and over and over again (this is about the third time for Tatum already). I can wait months, I just hate being deceived. It's getting tiring being strung along for the ride. I know that I should be happy that many talented authors write here for feedback/for free, but this is getting out of hand when promises means nothing. Nobody likes broken promises and idle lies.

I've learned to add possibly 1-2 months to an author's promise on literotica since some authors likes mindfuckery it seems (yes mindfucking with my enthusiasm). The wait continues...blah.

Yes, we are all waiting for the next installment. However, you do not pay to read the stories on this website and the author does have a life outside writing this story....so stop complaining! Additionally, despite whatever the author has promised, life happens for them and the editor. On a side note, love the story and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter :)

I currently have three books that are "finished" except for a little bit...that little bit is just enough to prevent me from submitting them to the publisher. Accusing the author of lying and generally running her down, is just going to make her that much more reluctant to publish. It's a great story and I think we're all really excited to see the next chapter, but I don't think being so nasty is any way to encourage her to submit it.

I'm sure you know that we're waiting :) When you're happy with it, I'll be waiting to read it.

Please finish the story, it's amazingly good!

Hi Tatum,

Your story ,characters, and writing style captured me.

There is a novel waiting to be completed.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Alan

I really do love the dynamic between these two but since it has been ten months since this chapter was posted I will only check this series once in a while. Sad to lose it but I won't hold my breath. Hope all is well with the author.

Hello All!

TD5 is off to my editor. Please accept my apology for the delay but life happens and sometimes circumstances and situations are out of our control. Please allow time for my brilliant and kind editor to work magic. Thanks for reading and for all your feedback. - Tatum

I just saw your post Tatum! I'm really excited to see you continuing and thanks for the advanced warning, I'm gonna do a re-read to get it fresh in my head. Really happy I get to read more as it's one of my favourites and I was wondering if you would be able to keep writing or if other commitments had made it too difficult. Thank you!

Hello All,

TD5 has been submitted. Just waiting on approval. - thanks for reading and sorry for taking so long to finish it. :)

-Tatum

Can't wait! thank you for continuing this. xxxx

I'm so excited for the next chapter. Thank you for continuing the story

as you can see, I'm excited!

Hi All,

TD5 was rejected because I am having some formatting issues, heading to the Apple store tomorrow. I was able to get it resubmitted this afternoon thanks to the help of a fellow author. :)

Also, please vote if you like this chapter and the new one. I am currently under one-star attack by the same person or couple of people and it has been happening for months and I have to ask Laurel to run a URL check, which takes up her time and we are all adults so we really shouldn't have to deal with this issue...but...

it happens. The same person/people do the one-bomb attacks to several of the authors on this site. Hopefully this will get cleared up soon.

Thanks for reading!!! :)

I will keep you all posted when the story is accepted (hopefully) :) - thanks, Tatum

Just wanted to make sure my last update made sense. TD5 has been resubmitted thanks to a fellow author - thanks Tatum

So excited this story will continue...I absolutely love it. But please, don't continue with anymore scenes as disturbing as the the first 2 (Dmitry raping Alex and then letting his friends torment and humiliate her). The cruelty gets to a point that any resolution between the two characters is improbable and unbelievable... and then I start losing interest. Dmitry is on the verge of becoming a one dimensional character in need of serious psychological intervention. I'm hoping that we'll start seeing some more nuances and dimensions to both his character and Alex's.

Thanks for keeping this story going, in spite of those who try to discourage you by ambushing you with low ratings. Don't let them interfere with your talented writing.

Im sorry your seem to under attack i think people are just fustrated because its been almost a year since you updated but you kept promising updates. I get that life happens. I am glad it was submitted. I am surprised they are such sticklers for format most sites dont care

OMG! Just happened to randomly come across this story again today and was wondering if it would ever be continued. Decided to go back and check comments. Was so excited to learn that another chapter would be posted very soon. Thanks for continuing to work on this story.

Another 5 star vote. Not surprised you are being attacked by haters, the story is very hard for some people to like. To me, well it is no longer crunch.

NOW it is crunch, twist, crunch again....

Awesome, thank you. You show us so much with this twisted tale

So happy you're picking this up again!

I looked for the next chapter a long time before thinking you gave up on this.

Don't give up!

You're writing a great story. It's harsh and raw and soooooo much better than all the fairy-tale pink ribbon style of non-consent we get buried with.

Don't stop writing and especially don't stop writing this story!

to Manuel Ferrara the fucking guts out of her.

Hahaahahha that cracked me

sad for najda dmitry took advantage of her love

also is helen still alive?was her sucide or muder fake?