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Let me know what you think about this chapter; it's a little bit of a change from my normal territory...
"her fingers were grazing the naked skin of his hips and her thumbs were stroking atop my thighs".
His hips? My thighs?
This is one of the best build up dad/daughter story I've read.. Please continue.. please.. I wish I could write like you so I could tell my version of this story..
I do not normally read male authors, but your title seemed interesting. I also have not responded before... Your story started well and is just getting better. I could almost believe you are writing from experience. Which means your writing well. I look forward to reading more of this story.
This story has been amazing and this chapter to it had me literally falling out of my chair. Excellent work
Why did you have to bring in a pervy mother into the scene and mess it up
Nowhere it was hinted that she could be bisexual
You were building up to something good , and got sidetracked by lesbian shit
OH YEAH, you are making this one hot story, mister. I haven't cum yet, but it's not for a lack of trying, I've been interrupted twice, the effing telephone, and by the ending of chapters, but I am really enjoying your story, it sounds true, and it's really well-written. Thanks again, and please keep writing in the same line.
R
I'm absolutely adoring this story! Very sexy, very sweet, and all too plausible.
My one persistent complaint about your work is that you have a very bad habit of shifting perspectives without warning. I.e. going from first-person to third-person then back to first-person in the middle of a scene.
This series is great, can't say enough good about it. I sure PRAY you are working on a follow-up!