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Click hereDevon hung his head for a bit, then took a deep breath and looked at the other three. "Thank you for bringing me your concerns. We were not having this discussion. Now, let's talk about what steps we need to take to keep us from being overrun by another pack."
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The talk ended. They would increase patrols. No one alone outside the gates. No hunting parties less than three. Signals for entering the compound. A close eye kept on all the women, particularly if pregnant. And, hardest of all, if any of them was captured by the Matlin pack, there would be no trade.
- COMMENTS
realist7over 9 years agoPlainshoneybadger3 & lucianlover
When you can't tell the difference between fantasy and reality you have a "serious" problem
lucianloverover 9 years agoglad she's not one of those weak, whiny females that would have submitted a long time ago! i love that she didn't leave them when they came to rescue her. I dont know how this will play out, but I'm sticking to the end!
Anonymousover 9 years agoI appreciate that Devon is kind enough, better than Ian Matlin but he kidnapped her. It's grew that this is more difficult and she's staying true to herself. I'd be pissed off long and hard too. I wish that bitch would try to take her babies. Forcibly taking her, raping her, not telling her about the extra rapey killing neighboring pack then taking her babies. Big fat no. It should take time to co.e to a reasonable arrangement with her if ever. You want Twilight shit , go read that.
Awesome job KemMyst.
Sincerely, Plainshoneybadger3
Anonymousover 9 years agoYou guys this is a fantasy story.. I mean seriously? You are on the wrong website in my opinion if you want to read stories about the same vanilla thing. I am a woman too and in real life I totally understand her reactions to her situation but in fantasy land I find her cold refusal to any kind of warm up to the alpha a little turn offish... im all for the build up but annes character is hard to like ... usually I sympathize woth the damzil and get excited to see if she falls in love of she escapes if shes rescued... yes the typical story line I admit its predictable but with this story I find myself feeling bad for the alphaand hope that anne gets away and he finds a better mate... anne just bug me I cant grt into her cold character at all.... shes such a stubborn do it your selfer which in real life again its awesome but in my fantasy land at least it just makes for a frustrating character who I want to push out the exit door.
Anonymousover 9 years agoShe wouldn't have to run if she wasn't kidnapped in the first place. Regardless of the fact they treat her nicely, that doesn't negate the fact that they stole her life from her and forced her into these circumstances.
katgoddess1over 9 years agoIf this story was about a man would there be any debate about who was at fault? Just because they treat her well does not negate the fact that they took her by force and hold her against her will! Would you blame a POW for trying to escape?
Anonymousover 9 years agoKidnapped, forced to have sex against her will... YES it's rape. She had EVERY RIGHT to run. or even lock them all in the den and burn it to the ground. Not her fault at all.
Anonymousover 9 years agoits time for anne to fall for her mate, now that she knows she has it good,!
