"Okay," she said. "Just remember you promised."
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dhillon23, Tim413413 and 24 other people favorited this story!
A curve ball.
seems like this chapter was inserted for the Lit readers who need a scene or two of bedroom romping to keep going.
i think its a very nice story thoe i ddnt lak marrisa wld hv prefered he ends up w susan
I have to disagree with the commenter who doesn't like Marissa. I think she is awesome. That is partly because the way she is described reminds me of a female that I was secretly in LOVE with for a while. But we were both married (to our spouses) and we never took the friendship anywhere. But I have often told myself that if neither one of us were married..........
To the author, you are a superb writer. I am an instant fan. I can't put this story down. Your character development is one of the best. Please, keep writing. Ignore haters and you will always have a fan in me.more...
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