Whispers From My Heart

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Such as could be called in-between-times, like when we ate, or were coming back from one of our sessions, we did talk. Initially, we had Velda to talk to us for the most part, though Velda had to know all there was to know about Dawn–our sexy Shining Moons–but it was what all happened to her while she was away.

"Right off, it was as if I was back in a weird world that I'd seen in many nightmares. I was a stranger that couldn't escape, and they were constantly trying to tie me down, to keep me as a slave, but only to display me, to show everyone what happened to those who strayed. That was how I felt, but they actually said nothing like that to me, nor did I tell them until the end that I was going again, then only my mother as I was leaving.

"The constant drumming into us of how horrible we were if we were homosexual was like a battering ram against me, one that I kept refusing to give in to though at first it scared me all over again. Each time we sang, I would think of how hollow it all sounded to me; the comparing of what they said time and again to what the bible really said, and more important, why, kept coming at me, then the fears started fading away as a fog in sunlight. That's how it was. That mean God of the bible, the Old Testament, was always in my mind, always being questioned by me, wondering how he could be so cruel, and order so many people killed. There was no freedom to be a real person, to grow, just to obey or be damned. It didn't seem right, it didn't seem good, and definitely not what, or how, we often tell ourselves about how our parents should be with us as children. It was terrible, and when I kept on seeing the contradictions in the bible, it was as if I was being fed and growing stronger and stronger, at the last, strong enough to break those shackles they'd held me with, and so I ran to you, to real love."

"Do you really feel free now?" Dawn had asked.

"Yes. Very free, and very loved."

Very loved! I had to smile at that. She was more than very loved. Dawn and I smothered her with our love, and in every way, especially physically. As we loved to be naked when at home, Dawn was invariably cornering Velda, caressing her succulent body, and bringing her to as many orgasms as she could with her kisses, caresses, and by invading her lower lips and bring out her flower into full bloom. Did she mind? She seemed to promote it, and why not, she had so many pleasures.

However, the greatest pleasures were when we both teamed up on her too tempting body as when we fucked her and at the same time tormented her and enhancing those wicked tortures her body so loved. A most wondrous torture she learned to dearly love was when I'd fuck her pussy, then turn her sideways, and Dawn would then penetrate her ass at the same time.

Dawn holding her from behind, her hands and

fingers caressing her everywhere she could, and me with my dildo meeting Dawn's simultaneously and kissing Velda as well as intermittently rubbing our breasts together, we took her to sexual, heavenly Nirvana many times. When we had given her all she could take, and Dawn had cleaned us up, she had to be held in the same way, sighing deeply often, even as she slept, her body remembering all of the sensations it had been privy to.

Whenever I took time to remember my existence, and how the three of us loved each other, I was amazed at the beauty we had created for ourselves in this cruel and harsh world of too many fictitious rules, of religions that tried to irresponsibly and ignorantly dictate what pleasures we should and shouldn't give to each other though it was what we desired from pure love of each other. It saddened me very deeply, but thankfully, our love always won out in my heart and mind, especially my heart that had settled on purring contentedly and whispering it's love of the love we all had for each other.

~End~

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5 Comments
joelafayettejoelafayetteover 8 years ago
good

I only ready through Rona and Hannah's first time. I do have a job and this is long :). But thanks for writing it; I enjoyed it.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 10 years ago
To Be or Not To Be...

There has been no bigger attack on sexuality in all its forms (homo, bi, trans, etc) than religion and the deliverers of the message. It(they) affects people differently. The comparison can be seen between all 4 women. Tho religion is 1 of the focal points, I think the bigger life experience here is to call into question anything that attacks our sensibilities To Be...whole, loving, self-actualized human beings; whether it be religion, laws, our parents, etc. What a beautiful world it would be if "isms" were eliminated, if there was no hatred - only love. The ills an injustices that affect the world would be no more. I think the 3 women living and loving together in the end without jealousy, possession, etc is symbolic of that idealistic, yet unrealistic world. But it sure was nice to read and to dream. Thank you Wistfall1

Arago007Arago007almost 10 years ago
Loved, Loved, Loved and then not so much.

I had to think about this a bit. It would not be a story for everyone, which the author acknowledges. I loved the length, though I think that it could have been edited a little better. There was quite a bit of redundancy, but I also felt like there were parts that could be expanded. I loved Hannah and Rona's story, I felt this one could have stood on its own. I thought when Velda was introduced, Hannah would have taken Rona's role, which she did, but with not as much success. Dawn was so open, but I would have liked more of her back story.

The religious aspects did not bother me, I appreciate the research done by the author and spent a little time with my bible after reading.

Though each love story spoke to me, I didn't love the end. I don't have a religious or moral issue with polyamory, though I think that both Hannah and Velda would have, so it seemed unrealistic. Too easy a solution when we know how hard it would be - within their own relationship (jealousy, insecurities, shared attention) and also to the outside world. Our community has gained a degree of acceptance, but having multiple partners in life has not.

I do think with some edit and polish it could be expanded and published - and I very much appreciate reading it in its FREE form :)

azure_skiesazure_skiesalmost 10 years ago
Fundamentalism

Is the anti-religion message too strong? My guess is that depends on your own personal experience and hence your perspective. I've never suffered in the way the protagonists do in this story but I do know all too well how it feels to not fit in and the consequences of being different.

The author has put her heart and soul into this story and has created a thing of beauty. Sometimes it is not easy to read because some of the experiences are horrible but it tells it like it is for those unfortunate enough to grow up in the bible belt and to be too intelligent or different for the liking of the fire and brimstone merchants. Civilisation will not progress while these people hold sway over hearts and minds - fundamentalism for me is in effect, if not in intent, an evil thing.

Exposure is needed.

SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkalmost 10 years ago
Sweet and Tart

You depict women in a most loving, and true, way. I agree about the joys of a woman's body and that religion is overbearing in a lot of ways and while that view here is very one sided, it is none the less true and damaging. The other story, the one of love and loss is beautiful on its own, though a bit repetitious in the language, not so much in either case to lessen the stars below five. I will close with some advice. People who carry a singular unwavering message are often referred to as zealots, a term not restricted to religion as you describe it. Even in your story your tormented main character is married in a religious ceremony. So find balance, just as many, if not more people find comfort from their churches so do not toss the baby with the bath water.

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