All Comments on 'Why? Ch. 01'

Noooooooooooooooooooooooo where is the other part

Who is Janice? I thought the wife was Melissa.

I was aware that the original story was written in 2011 and, although promised, it was never completed. I knew going in that I was going to be very disappointed where the story STOPPED!!!. I wasn't disappointed.

Can't believe that this author didn't follow up (as he said upfront he had three more parts ready to go). While I don't wish him any bad luck, hope he just didn't finish the story????

A real shame.

I've reported this story as an unfinished story to the webmaster. The author hasn't published anything for a number of years therefore this story will never get finished. Hopefully it will get taken down and won't disappoint any more readers.

God! This just went from a 5 to a 1 & if I could, a zero.

I can’t believe her or the author doing this to the readers.

Diabolical shit!

Bill

complicated, all about nothing and goes no where.

3 just because its unfinished.

There is a continuation https://www.literotica.com/s/why-the-reason

This story is like his story. It's almost like a joke in that his character is looking for answers just like we are looking for answers about how the story ends.

Wow just left it there. You could try to finish it

What the hell? Why is the story not finished? Shheesh really needs more. LP

What to do? There is an ending by another writer the title is Why? The Reason by StoneyWebb. I'm going to read it now and I'm hoping for fireworks.

he puts Mickey Splaine to shame. LOL way too long to get to this point. Entertaining though.

Well that was good then it wasn’t.How can you write a really great story then ruin it and waist our time by leaving it in mid sentence.Don’t waste time on this idiot

Just dropped out mid sentence almost.

Ripped off an hour of my time.

One 🌟

Bill S.

This really was a dumb story, and a total waste of time.

Where’s the rest of it?

He had something good going until he fucked it up with no ending.

what a completely useless story. "My wife left me for a billionaire, I'm a loser but finally at peace with myself." Was hoping somebody would hold Melissa's head under water for a long time or he'd figure out how to set things straight in some fashion, or just get on with his life. None of that, just pathetic self pity.

Sorry but this was a pathetic story about a loser of a guy. Awful.

I liked the story. A good mystery. I shrink you owe us the two more chapters you promised.

Ed

Finish the story! I’m hooked!

I gave it a 1. If you ever decide to finish it, it will most likely get a 4 or better. Good to this point, but this point is far from the end.

ELEVEN years and new chapters???

There is a follow-up to this story by StoneyWebb, "Why? The Reason" - December 2020.

https://www.literotica.com/s/why-the-reason

Good storytelling until no ending. Please finish.

Alienation of affection would bring millions in a settlement from a billionaire to avoid terrible publicity. R. H.

What a total loser the husband is.

Too many readers believe stupidities that they read in L:W, such as the recent commentator that said "Alienation of affection would bring millions in a settlement from a billionaire to avoid terrible publicity. R. H." Sorry kid -- no such cause of action and everyone would know the facts anyhow.

I just read this story. Now on to the sequel, completed by another author. 5 stars, because it's a good story. but it needs the ending. The Bear withholds judgment.

The BEAR

This was an interesting story now the 2nd part makes more sense not sure why the original writer decided not to finish it and left it for someone else to but it at least got finished unlike so many stories on this site

tittle of the second chapter is Why? the reason. From reading the comments everyone finds this story by finding the next chapter and then coming here. if i had found this first i would not be able to find part two times like this are very frustrating espically with all the references in comments to the next part

Hopefully he'll find closure with Miller's wife, maybe putting buns in her oven...

bummer this was never completed by the original author. Hopefully StoneyWebb's conclusion is good.

Bummer. Written well and a good story but would have been better without the dot dot dots. A conclusion was written by StoneyWebb called "Why? The Reason." 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thanks.

StoneyWebb finished it. Taken together, is a great story.

Well obviously I am following in RanDog's footsteps on the stories I am reading and yes I ditto his comments.