- Gay Male
- Wolf & Fae
- Page 5
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"Wow." Raven whispered.
"Yep." Zach was already nearly asleep.
"I love you, Zach."
"I love you too, Raven."
Zach and Raven fell asleep content to be with each other for the rest of their lives.
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Just wanted to say thanks to all the positive and negative comments on my other chapters, I hope you enjoyed this story.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoA wonderful story of love, consideration and support! Well done! Thank you.
JJMemaw0623over 7 years agoYou need an editor . . . but other than that I loved it! You need to keep writing, you're good. Gave you 5 *'s for such creativity!! Awesome job!
canndover 9 years agoNICE STORY...I just wish you could do a re-write and develop the characters and storyline a bit more. I think beta readers would help alot and tell you where you can develop it. I'd be happy to help if you ever decide to do so. It is a sweet story. I'd love to see them move to the pack and have Raven take over, etc.
avidreadrover 10 years agoI just re-read this story. I enjoy it, but it needs a re-write very badly. The plot and characters work, but there are a lot of grammatical errors. Also, the story is rushed. You might consider breaking it into two parts, with one ending when Z & R get together and the next beginning the year later when they finally get intimate.
hunniexover 10 years agoHey I really like this story, you are really in touch with your talent of writing. Keep going sweetie. xXx
