by PacoFear
My girlfriend does the exact same thing she does, writing on my skin. I rarely get it. She doesn't get most of it when I try it too. It's hard to read a heart drawn on your skin.
This was without a doubt one of the best if not THE best stories I have read. I hope there are going to me even more episodes in the bear future, Congrats on a well written story !
Amazing writing a really good story that was very warm and loving and not filth for the sake of filth . Well done
I have read thousands of stories on Literotica and Kristen’s archives but this story is by far the best one I have ever read. I truly loved this story thanks so much for this.
David
My. God. wow. lol, the only Smut I've ever ended up crying to, at the end of the story, sweetly. With goosebumps. lol. Amazing. Thank you!
(hot as hell, too! Exactly what I was looking for, b4 I even knew it myself...)
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Bri.
(ps: kinda reminds me of the very first smut I'd ever read, when I stumbled across an old worn-out paperback copy of Flowers In The Attic as a very young pervKid (but this was better)... My 2-yrs younger sister and I read it together, same for the first stack of rained-upon old discarded nudie-mags I'd found off the road in the woods, a huge pile like some truck had just dumped em there... We eagerly soaked-up that Vintage smut together, pics and stories, tho we never "looked" at each other that way, not quite... Now I wish we had, lol. We've always been Too Many Details close, sexually, tho, ever since; just wide-open, graphically, yet innocently... Now, I wonder, a bit... We're in our 50's now, and recently very angrily Estranged, for good it definitely appears, sigh... - ah, well... To What Might Have Been... )
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Very very nice ...
Maybe only comment is the romp on the sandy beach. Not sure how feasible/realistic that is, with all the sand on hands and fingers and everywhere...
I loved this story so much!
I never believed there was a Chip, but I never guessed the m was a ❤️ until the end… Probably should have, because my wife and I have exchanged ILY marked gifts over the years…
I really appreciate the pacing on this one and the snarkiness.
Yes, I worked out that there was no Chip, and that Imu was in fact I<3U, quite early in the story (after all, 'the chase' was her main characteristic) - but even so, I enjoyed the journey.
Well done.
What a great story. I notice you've not published on this site for quite a number of years. Unfortunate. Thanks for sharing this story. Great read.
G
I knew it was a heart early on,when she spoke of him never getting it. Great job on this story!
Every time I read this, I realize this is the hottest story on literotica. At least in the top 3 anyway.
Hottest bro sis story ever, been wedging the whole time. Would love a sequel.
Lizzie was fun to get to know and follow, Richard more simpel but truly believable.
Thought "imu" could mean I marry U...
what would be awesome is if you put how she told her mother or tried too except that her mother knew there was no chip just robbie and that she supported their relationship either because their father was her brother or that robbie was adopted
Very GOOD sexy storey !! Wish it was illustrated particularly if you could pay a slender small tit tallish girl to pose naked with a waxed hairless pussy & long Blonde hair in the head !!
Mmmm. Good. Started susprcting the Chip thing about halfway through, but the story was still captivating.
Not a story for part 2, I think. The scene is set for (ahem) 'nonmarital bliss', and the suspense is gone. Perfect is is is.
Dude I freaking love this story, 5 stars and going on favorites! This is the best story I have read period. I seriously hope you do a part 2 but I understand that it is unlikely. and for imu I thought it was "I miss you" but that didnt make any sense so you had me on that, but I suspected that chip didnt exist from the beginning still though, I love how instead of "I DIDNT SEE THAT COMING" you made it "I SHOULDVE SEEN THAT COMING" That is the best type of writing in my opinion and I hope that you see this
Some the best writing to be found on this site. The flow was perfect; not a misstep to be found. I don’t think a Pt 2 would serve this story. It is complete and satisfying as it is.
I will look to your other writings for the MORE other commenters have requested.
As for “imu” and “Chip,” you had me on both of them. I thought it stood for l Missed You and Chip was some big jock who came from money.
Quite an interesting twist to the brother sister mindset
Also got to say you're a very good author
I think this might honestly be the best story I've ever read on this site. I love the slow build-up, the unravelling of emotions and desires that are present before the narrative begins. That emotional weight makes the lovemaking almost cathartic, once it happens. A stunning achievement.
I figured out i m u early on, and the mythological chip too, but I wasn't looking for a detective story. Nice work.
Liked it, but didn’t like the way she stopped him from relieving his tension.
I suppose they could have involved their mother. But that would be another story!
This story is amazingly well written. I first read it years ago and rereading it, I'm reminded of the impression that it made then, the impression that it still makes! A fantastic blend of emotion and arousal that somehow makes the breaking of the taboo almost insignificant. This author seems to have a penchant for a 'love conquers all' feeling in their stories, and it feels reassuring and wholesome in a mildly confusing way in this instance. I love it.
Holy shit. I would've never thought this story could be this great. I hate myself for skipping it out on recommendations one too many times.
Caught the imu and fake fiancé right away. Well written erotica, even though sibling taboo isn't my thing.
This was good. And yes, I figured out what "imu" was nearly at first glance. Mostly because it was obvious, but also because I've also had a GF that wrote on me. And yes, I'm a guy.
Great love story!! I did catch the imu very early as an ex and myself would wright on each other the same way, not the m but the heart. Really enjoyed the heart warming tell of the love and seduction.
[25.08.22]
Like my 4th time reading, still excellent!
Loove this part:
"Talk... talk dirty to me?" she asked quietly between gasping and twitching.
"Sure, let's see... Mildew. Pond scum. Mouse droppings."
"Ewww. C'mon, you know what I mean. Sexy dirty."
Perfectly encapsulates their love for each other.
What a great story!
IMU and no Chip clicked for me when she described their first time to Richie.
I caught onto the imu about half way but it was a very passionate story lots of buildup
I'll be honest, I caught on to the imu and that there wasn't a Chip very early but then again, I have a strange ability to catch these things in stories and movies. Still gave it 5 stars because this story deserved every one of them.
Love this story . Its tied with "Sleeping with Ellie " and "off with her pants " by Xarth .very well done
Love this story . Its tied with "sleeping with Ellie" and "off with her pants" by Xarth . Very well done. I keep coming back for more
I guess I'm a true romantic. I got it from the first, but it made the story all that more enjoyable. Thanks for an awesome readable tale.
Wow well done thee love was what made the story. Wish I had a sister .mine was sexy and fun but I she passed away before we could work. Things out. Thanks
I love this story. Ive re-read it multiple times, and i keep comign back to it. It is beautiful and loving and so sweet. Thank you for this. 5/5
Nato
A beautifully descriptive tale, I admit that I was confused by the 'imu', I had 'I marry you', which seemed to for with the story around page five. ***** for this.
Keep up the great work.
Nope, didn't get it. I kept thinking 'I love you' not 'I heart you' and my engineer's brain couldn't make the connection. Wonderfully well done story. Thanks for sharing.
Clearly one of the better brother/sister stories on this site. I thought IMU was "I'll marry you" LOL (although the real meaning was sooooooo much better)
I liked this story a lot.
And I think there'll be another once in a lifetime howl in the not too distant future.
People that much in love always, Always, ALWAYS want babies.
Give them a couple, and I'll be happy
A very wonderful story that after at least 3 reads is still as beautiful as the first time. It is a gut wrenching 💔 😢 love that wish I could have experienced. Thank you so very much.
I'm not really into anal, but this is the best story I've ever read that has that action. It's the tender love between them that is the clincher. How about an epilog regarding how they loved each other forever.
I've read this story about three times and really like it. I just wish the author had minimized the descriptions of Lizzies body instead of minimizing her tush. Above the waist- no complaints, but to read again and again the description of a boyish ass (and hips subsequently) is somewhat off-putting. Should have left it at 'a lean runner's body' or something like that, and leave the rest to the reader's imagination.
Beautiful! I wish that their relationship would have somehow been squared with mom.
I just read this for the second time. I got through a few pages before realizing I had read this quite a few months ago.
It wasn’t as good as the first time knowing the ending, but I still gave it 5 stars.
Nice story with a good ending.
Bill S.
Came for the smut (in both ways) but stayed to be proven right about the "imu" :)
This story was fantastic by the way, I very much enjoyed it from start to finish
More please. Wonderful yarn. Would love a sequel/more parts.
One suggestion/a small addition to his thought:
"...He knew he'd be explaining that to Saint Peter someday...."
+ "Possibly today."
PacoFear, Great story weaving with a big twist. No mom is going to follow that going shopping ruse though. There were also some words of wisdom, much to be learned about giving, receiving and learning together. 5 Star.
One of the few I keep returning too. So we'll done. Great build up, great characters, even better author. Thank you
What a beautiful story. The love and tenderness that you portray between the brother and sister is amazing. You build the forbidden desire they both feel in a spectacular way, and they way you bring it all together is admirable. You truly have an incredible imagination and knack for telling a great story.
The only complaint I had is how in-stride the brother took it that he was having sex with a girl who was both engaged and his sister. Other than that, it was a very enjoyable read.
Amazing! Easily one of my favorite stories here. I usually print out my favorites, so I can read it whenever and this one...just great. I didn't catch the "IMU" but it was masterfully revealed at the end...and it made perfect sense. Bravo!
Lovely story. Even though I tripped to the Chip angle pretty early, you still held my interest to the end. IMU" missed it clean. Bravo!
I'm rereading this for the I don't know how many times. I love it still, I love how you develop the characters and plot, and; of course, how hot it is!!
Great story and thankfully we were saved from the drama of their mother!!!
Such a fantastic story. Its been stuck in my head the past few days, so i went back to share my thought on it. It was like a good dream with this perfect dream girl. She were teasing and smiling and giggeling with a perfect personality. As a boy at 17, this is probaly the best story/nobel or anything ever i've read. And the sex arent Even the Best part; its the girl. And anal is kind of a tutn off for me, but this story had me interested all the way through. Already at page number four i was like: "fuck, its going to end soon.". This was like a perfect dream.
Very well written. So few stories on here are able to pull at the heartstrings like this one can. There’s something to be said about a story, novel, or etc that just sticks with you no matter what the subject matter is.
Definitely one of the best written brother/sister stories ever. Dunno where you are or if you're even alive, Pack, but I sure as hell hope you're ok and that you'll return to posting after so many years!
Aw! I love this story
It’s so hot and real.
I don’t usually enjoy Anal stories but this one hit the right sweet spot!
Beautiful
I'm a guy and I was almost shedding happy tears at the end. I thought that imu meant "I miss you". This was a great story. Would love to have some kind of a sequel to this.
Wonderfully written and loving. I didn't figure out the IMU, but I am a left brain person and take things literally far more often than I should. Anyway, thanks for writing the story.
She made him feel jealous and inadequate, and it worked. Sister or not, they're all the same.
i generally dont read long stories like this, but it was really good, with all the teasing and leading up to the final sequences. Its My understand that with such a relationship, often comes a pregnancy, then marriage between the two, and their mothers ultimate acceptance and joy that she'll be a grandmother from her own children.
Never really one for incest stories, but this one was written really well, and the waiting and begging was very erotic! Great writing, definitely got me wet
My second reading also.
I could only rate this as 4 stars because of the lack of an ending.
What about his girlfriend?
Do he & his sister ’marry’ & live together?
I’ll definitely tread all your stories because they’re well done & fun but I’d really like a good ending from you.
Bill S.
I find this to be one of the best imhave ever read, still that way after the second reading. I did notnfigure out the meaning of her drawing! I will read this again. Thank you so very much!
On a scale of 1 to 5 stars, this story of yours deserves a 7!
Btw I did not get the imu until about halfway through the explanation paragraph.
Please write more!