All Comments on 'Words on Skin'

The Anon two comments before me said pretty much everything I was going to say too lol. Amazing story

Amazing story & characters. Gripped me from beggining to end. The dialogue, the conflict, the struggle were all very real. Congrats!

I was never into anal, but still find your story hot even during the rump-romp scenes. The overall writing is also great, all those little detours, giving the background, painting the picture in all details.

I did guess that there's no Chip after Lizzie forgot his name, from there on it was also easier to decipher the M as not standing for "miss" but to be a heart ;)

Great work!

Very good writing, Paco, and the way you handle dialogue is quite artful. So many stories on this site are way overwritten, but not yours. Please continue writing these intelligent and sexy stories!

Endearing read

Lovely little story, thanks

Great!

Awesomely written, grammatically correct and above all else .... believable. Lovely story. More please.

I've read this several times and each time find something new to appreciate! Plot is good to start and great at finish. Lizzie comes through with all the annoyances and qualities of a little sister, (I know, I have 2!). The brother's struggle with the transition shows a logical & completely believable change from siblings to lovers. Well Done!

Rick of Fla.

I figured out IMU the second time I read it :)

I knew it that chip didn't exist cause of how tight her pussy was

That was an outstanding story. Thank you so much for sharing it. You put it together amazingly.

Hell, I love Lizzie too... lol. I have never heard a dingo, but have laid under the stars in the mountains in Europe,

and out in New Mexico, and up in the mountains of Washington state and hear the howls of Timber wolves',

and coyotes.... never heard the sound she made, but loved it all the same. Darrell, W Texas

Sweet, pervy story, well written and edited; best thing I’ve read on this site. Got IMU on p.4. One minor note is that here in the States our wild canines go “ow-owoo” or just “owoo.” Didn’t know about dingo howls but it’s a fun fact!

I just…. Read this whole thing. It was a great story, thank you.

Nice!

God this was so lovely to read. True love stories always are. I saw it coming from a mile away but even so still warmed my heart, and other things....

A 5 is too low

I liked this one a lot! Thanks🥰🥰

I wish there was a way to recommend this story to all the readers here on literotica. It is that good!

This is my second read of this great story. I think the first read was shortly after it’s release. Sad to say, I couldn’t remember the meaning of “I m u”. I was so involved in the story that it wasn’t important. When finally reaching the end I’m so glad to have forgotten it. Maybe in another 10 or so years, I’ll renew an old acquaintance and discover it again. Thank for the writing! JW

Well done sexy and erotic

This was great. And no, I didn’t until the very last moment. Anne

Nicely written! Had me hard through the whole story!

Wonderful, well written story.

It looks like it was written back in 2009, and PacoFear hasn't added anything new since 2013. Too bad, this guy is a great wordsmith and his stories are original and creative.

Obviously 5/5!

Really love the story picked up on the two surprises about Midway before the reveal of both

Loved it.....must be rare for a guy....I did figure it out about halfway through.

LOVED IT!!! If there were typos or misspellings, don't give a squat. Wonderful story, well done, could read more if you have it in you.

Well done!

Why not continue this?

This is in the top 5 stories on literotica. One of my favorite.

I could not get past the first page. The imagery was all wrong. The author used incomplete thoughts. Was not descriptive enough. How could someone climb around on the bed after being on the floor, and on their knees, and still have a massive penis in their mouth? You can not.

HOT>>>>HOT>>>>HOT

I was gonna write something about when I figured out what 'imu' meant, but then I realised that this story was released less than a week before my 9th birthday, and the last time you uploaded anything was over 10 years ago. I enjoyed the story and hope that one day you may upload something again

Steaming hot 🔥 loved it.

CRINGE for lizzie when she tells mum about fake marriage

This was by far the beautifullest story I ever read. It brought tears to my eyes at the very end. That’s true love.

One of the most well written pieces on this entire website.

I love the story, the characters and everything about thos

Beautiful story, well written and underlying eroticism throughout. Loved every word.

That was a great ride. For everyone involved, except mom😎

Simply the BEST

Very well written!

Great story. Will it have a part two?

Good story and very good tag. Naughtiness and niceness work best together.

Never figured it out either, till the end. Nice story. Thanx

Very good ☺️! Very hot 🔥! Very romantic 😍!

Love it. Cool

just came back to re-read this for the fourth time. still just as impressed. this isnt sex. this is love, honest and true. take a page from lizzie and rich. love someone the way they love each other.

Love so many things about your story, their "innocent naughty", supportive and competitive relationship was the perfect backdrop for her seduction. My heart sank when she announced her engagement and more so when "Chipp" had claimed her virginity. Wrong as it May be I'm in love with my own sister (no-one knows) as much as Richie and Lizzie are and, apart from Lizzies lusty betrothal to Ritchie, your characters and their interactions were believable. I also missed the I❤U but was More than happy with her revelation. I'll keep wishing. Thanks.

Not very macho, I know, but this made me cry. I think back over my own mostly gone life and of opportunity missed for reasons valid and not valid.

To have and hold true emotion, so pure so honest, is indescribable by this guy. And yes, incest is a pure and honest emotion! It was deemed bad by the same group of alter boy fuckers that said pre marital sex is bad and a million things they didn’t get then and never will get.

Live by your heart, not by rules someone else arbitrarily make up, be it love, or damn near anything else. As a famous man once said:”You’re right to swing your fist stops at my nose.”

Sing away, young people! Life is too short to worry as long as you aren’t hurting others doing so.

I enjoyed every chapter of this story. I knew as soon as she watched her brother, and her friend have sex that sometime she would have him too. When the name Chip came up I knew that it was a fake. My hope now is that you'll continue this story. You just can't leave it lying there in the sand. Thank you for the best story I've read yet.

Didn’t figure it out till the end. Great story.

Thats an amazing one. Sex story but very heart touched. It could have been a short novel dude

You had me fooled. I was guessing that the IMU stood for I Marry U.

With Lizzy giving Richard all of her first-times of everything, I'm extremely disappointed that she didn't save her vaginal cherry for him as well. She thought that from the time she was ten...9 long years, that she was in love with her brother, giving him many firsts, and she let someone else have that one? It deserves an explanation at the very least. On the plus side, I'm really pleased that you had her love her brother so damn much that she not only helped him hook up with her best friend, but even at the end told him straight out that she would share him with other girls and be his lifetime sex toy. That's the ultimate expression of a woman's love for her man IMHO.

Loved it!! Amazing job!! As soon as she was like who is Chip? I knew he was fake lol because he was fishy before that! Great job again!!

I wish I could give you more than 5 stars! Absolutely beautiful!

Excellent story , really couldn’t pull my self away from this read.

Very good one i kinda knew there was something fishy with "chip" and her marriage

Absolutely love this story , very beautiful and erotic, thank you :)

I'm not an incester per say but I find it okay in fantasy and this was well written,despite 'Chip" not existing Lizzy was non-virgin by an unnamed character before sex with Richard right?

Literally, one of the best and most well written erotic stories, I've ever read...well done. The build up was awesome, and delivery was even better. I've read alot of these stories that go directly to sex...the sex is great, but the build up and getting there is the best part. Beautifully written, keep it up and don't let ANYONE detour u from writing, seriously u were made for it....

believe it or not i was at least hoping that it was a heart after the first few times i saw it. a little more anal than i like, but i understand how that had to happen to explain wanting to do something because of the up coming marriage to Chip. i really like the slow build ups, the back ground, and not just sex sex sex. very good story.

One of the best stories on this site. 5 stars.

I really enjoyed your work. Very nice way of getting your thoughts brought to paper. I read alot of all kinds of literature. Your Adventure made me feel I was scooter. Keep writing son. By the way I figured out what lizzie wrote just after their first conversation at it!! Sorry but Keep up the good work

Boring as hell for the first few chapters but you turned it around for the better thank god.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

i was like "wait, is this meant to be like a heart?"

Beautifully written was a bit slow in the beginning but it made sense afterwards can’t wait to read what you have up your sleeve next

slow buring,loved it,is there going to be a sequel ?

Boring first couple of chapters

A beautiful story and yes I figured it out early in the story. Loved it! Enjoyed the sexual tension she created and even though she appeared to be a sub, she was really a little dom. Great job! Added to my favs

One of my favorites ❤

this is my fav <3

Great story. Continue the story with the mother joining them & fucking the son.

Hotter than hell!

Thank you.

I was laughing out loud when with the opportune "brother comes first."

Was pretty good. Thank you

Absolutely one of my favorites. Beautiful, loving, sweet and much more!

She should've been a virgin still. That fact makes the entire story less believable.

I feel like the 'imu' thing spoke wonders for her determination and the fact that she gave her virginity to someone else goes in contrast to that tone. Obviously if this were a true story then there would be some leeway in regards to how the girl felt growing up, her conflicting emotions and the whole drama of it being 'in a fit of weakness' but since this isn't a true story this little piece of writing turns into a giant glaring error marring an otherwise perfect story.

scooter name killed the story. I seriously don't understand why the author thinks this will be funny.

This the best story I've ever read. Figured out what imu was the first time.. and also that chip was a phantom even before when she asked "who?" on chip's mention. The chase.. IMU.. chip.. this is a masterpiece. i know this is more than a decade old.. still I hope I get to read more of what's ahead. This is therapy for me. Thanks.

4/5 stars 🌟

Fiancée is a woman.

Fiancé is a man.

Otherwise a good read.

Mom was an unnecessary complication though.

Fiancée is a woman.

Fiancé is a man

I am not usually not into sibling incest, however, your story must be one of the very best I have ever read.

The emotional upheaval was painful at times, but the story just had to be completed. I was very suprised at my feeling at the end. Got me thinking back to my younger days, no I did not have sex with my younger sister with being 16 years old when she was born. But I do love her very much. PG

Such a sweet story! Awww. Well written. Love the butt play.

I've read this story many times. It's in my top 3 all time favorites. Such a beautiful story.

I thought it meant I marry you

Outstanding!! I enjoyed your story immensely. It was definitely not too long, I enjoyed every paragraph on every page. The almost getting caught scene in the bathroom was funny, tender, and erotic, loved it. My only critique is that I wish there would have been one more page to include how Lizzi performed her act of chip calling to break off their engagement and expanding a bit on their happily ever after together. This narrative deserves to be made into a series of multiple chapters. I may be late in the game, I don't remember when you submitted this story. But if you have not already submitted a sequel to this amazing story I hope that you are seriously considering doing so. I rated your story 5 stars, I wish I could have given your story more.

i thought imu was i miss you

Loved it, and picked up on im the second time I saw it. More please.

Absolutely one the best stories I've read!

Not a bad storyline, though I was a bit disappointed with the ending. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it! One of my favorites. Best description of ideal female body I've seen to date.

This is a fantastic story. I knew she loved him, and I knew that was what she was telling him with the first ”imu”. I knew there was never a Chip when you said he had to work instead of going to the beach with her. I did not figure out that it was a heart until you disclosed it in the story. This is the first of your stories I’ve read. I hope the rest are as good, I’m not sure if they could get any better. Thank you!

Absolute genius. Never fails to give me goosebumps and I've read it more times than I'd care to mention! The pace, setting and emotional tone all blend together to create a literary masterpiece.

This story is romantic and constantly building. It hooked me from the first page and all I wanted was the love to bloom. It seemed to take forever, but if it hadn't it wouldn't have been as intense as it was when the story finally 'climaxed'.

I can't wait to read your other stories!

I loved this story! The 'chase' was so well conceived, written, and as a former athlete/runner, that part was especially nice. I wondered if Chip was real about 1/2 way through; and was hopeful.

And, NO, I never figured out 'imu'.

Such excellent story telling...so vivid, I want a "Lizzie"

The best story I have ever read here. Perfect!

WOW !!! VERY good story ! Is there more? Hopefully? And I sorta had it figured out but wasn't quite sure. Again great story

Before I say anything critical, I want to say It was great! Wonderful!

I thought Chip was a phony trick from his first mention. As for IMU, I never figured out what it stood for but the translation was obvious.

Maybe the mother could have had a bigger part and been more real.

Too long but it kept me reading.

I am to be commended; it was hard to find fault with a story that good!!!!!!!

All these comments and you still want more ?!!!

I figured that ( Chips ) were down but I couldn't work out how she was going to get out of this,

particularly as his mother had supposedly paid the rental for the holiday home.

One or two unanswered questions for me, as well as bro.

Wow, fucking amazing. Just wow. Maybe not the hottest story, but still the best story. And definitely hot enough!