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Click hereAlon nodded at the Chief. "I will do my best in honor of Poppe Yim. Thank you for allowing us to remain. I would feel bad leaving my family." He stepped forward and wrapped his arms around the Chief and started sobbing into his shoulder.
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maxd01over 9 years agoAuthorI wish to thank you for calling me the lovely name yet hiding behind the anonymous ability to post. Because of this I have no reason to listen to what you have to say about the story. Have a nice anonymous day.
Anonymousover 9 years agoIf you don't find a way to bring Jim back you truly will be an ASS! Because this is a fucked up ending.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoYou wanted more GRRR's! Here ya go. I would never second guess any writer. But if Jim dies of anything other than old age surrounded by his family I may never read anything else you write. I suspect there is much more going on here than we, your faithful readers, understand. Enjoying the story very much up to this point. The fact tjat you imply your not done with this sgory yet gives me hope. Thank you.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI don't know why you chose to kill off Jim nor do i really care why but please,i loved reading the World of Ranicke series cause it was well written,had romance,love,action,and comedy all in one. Please,bring Jim back somehow because while i hope you write more of this series it just won't be the same without him. Whatever you decide to do with this series,I want to say thank you for writing it since as much as I cried when it happened and wish you hadn't had Jim die in this chapter i still enjoyed reading up until he died. I do applaud you for keeping his name alive though by having Sheeha name their child Jim
drmrblualmost 10 years agoNothing like knocking off the hero and letting the story change direction, again. Actually there could still be an echo/ricochet/dialation effect that could surprise us all. Great story, just a bit of a downer there at the end, this is definitely a tragedy in the classical sense. Not everyone lives to a ripe old age and sees many generations of offspring grow up and multiply. Thanks for letting the new comers get integrated into tribal life. Sounds like a great place to retire, all except the steaming season. Please do continue to turn our dull lives off for a moment or three and let us indulge in a bit of fantasy like this, again... ;o)
kinkykayekayealmost 10 years agoI saw this and thought what an awesome birthday present and then you do this with Jim soo mean. :-( :-( :-(
