Rock-A-Bye Breezy

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fawnie
fawnie
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Lullabies past,
tomorrow's proms.
She dances past
curves,
puberty,
eww boys.
Moments spent rocking,
wiping flung peas from the wall,
vanished.
"hush little baby"
replaced by Celine,
"a new day has come"
Like memories kept
and photogragh albums,
she grows.
Do I dare close my eyes,
wake in the morning,
to discover the door
no longer swings open.

fawnie
fawnie
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Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
my girls

are 15 and 21 and damn its so hard to even THINK about the oldest one graduating college and leaving, It just hurts so much sometimes, but its pride, not pain...it will be fine..lovely poem fawnie, I really enjoyed it, you got it just right :)

echoes_sechoes_salmost 20 years ago
Double

"past" kind of broke the flow a tiny bit. Perhaps dances "beyond" curves or similar?

Otherwise beautiful and hitting hard, mine is 11 and growing fast...I see this happening. Thank you

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Oh, Fawnie....

....you got this one so right! The improvement jumps off the page at me. Keep it going, Mississippi/Florida!

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Shit!

That hurts, Fawnie. Mine's 14. Lovely sentiment, well said.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
very nice

a great little snapshot and a look inside a mothers head.

A great moment captured

thank you

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