- Erotic Poetry
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Click hereloop the rope
give me peace
bind me tight
sweet release
meet the ends
shut me in
pull them tight
it begins
my head bowed
my back straight
breathing deep
now the wait
here it comes
slicing air
now the burn
now the tear
stalking circles
'round my place
clenching fists
find my face
break my mind
spirit bends
take my soul
now it ends
leave me wanting
leave me needing
cut and torn
crushed and bleeding
you walk away
with sated breath
my tears flow free
my little death
grab the blade
cut the rope
let me down
so much for hope
- COMMENTS
WickedEveabout 20 years agoIt stumbles in a few spots. Read it aloud and, for example, when you get to "my tears flow free" you'll notice that it would read better if you dropped either flow or free. Actually, I think that may be the only spot that needs a tiny "fix."
I love "stalking circles."
