Hyperventilating

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Remec
Remec
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Laughter,
uproarious and sudden,
binds my ribs and
grips my throat.
Breath is forced
in and out...
roughly,
quickly...
passing through curious
lungs,
that wonder
if they
will ever
work
again.
My back hurts.

Remec
Remec
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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

But it is the kind of hurt that is so wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Sweet

nothing better than a huge belly laugh.. the kind that makes you cry.. beg for air.. making all your muscles sore. loved it

v~

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
You know, now

we would want to see what the laughter was all about. It does leave a feeling of "missing the joke". Very Good.

LiarLiarover 19 years ago
This poem...

has been reviewed in the New Poems thread at the porty forum.

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago
yep..

best kinda laughter there is!

very nice!

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